All Comments on 'Lovely Linda and Sexy Sarah Pt. 01'

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texcavemantexcavemanover 7 years ago
good start

But, I hope it was an accident when she wrapped her legs around your "waste".

Waste is more likely to go out with the trash, or rubbish as some call it. Waste is

also flushed down the toilet.

My apologies for being so critical, but the image of her legs wrapped around waste was a waste.

Otherwise an entertaining start..

TSpank61TSpank61over 7 years agoAuthor
Just a typo

Will work on the proof reading.

yarnspinnerryarnspinnerrover 2 years ago

Well this quickly escalated to a place I wasn't expecting! But with the author's name being Tspanks, I guess I should have seen it coming. ;->

But I have to wonder, how did Timmy know that Sarah's bikini highlighted her ass perfectly, if she was sitting in a lounge chair?

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Back after a few years. Some new short stuff posted recently, working on a couple longer stories. Will publish as I finish them.

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