All Comments on 'Love's Labors Ch. 03'

I'm loving this series - can't wait to find out what the last labors are going to be! Thanks for writing.

I'm enjoying this story and I'll probably be a bit saddened when he completes his "labors." I'm glad you selected mature characters with jobs, kids and real life things going on. I have only criticism so far. Kendra seemed downright pissed when the story began. She softened somewhat as Dan tried deep throating the dildo and she began getting turned on. However the logic for her going from pissed, to kind of turned on, and then into her dominant kinky side feels pretty weak. Waxing Dan, using a butt plug, wanting him to tongue fuck her ass, willing to have Greg see the videoes and having Alicia video them - well, she definitely got her kink on. And it leads quite well into Alicia joining the fun in coming chapters. But where in Hell did that come from?

Won't stop me from enjoying new chapters, though!

I don't like the direction this has been going. she is obviously cheating with mack and /or mack and alica and is turning him into a cockold step by step.

Great stuff

I have to be honest here. This story and your writing (except for the spelling errors), was one of the hottest and best written stories on this site, and I’ve read thousands. The realism and excitement you fill a story with is nothing short of artistic genius. You are such a talented writer that people frequently comment about your characters as if they were real and actually did the stuff you dreamed up for them. Your mind is just chock full of sexy and exciting ideas and scenarios. I love it ❤️. You are already in my top 3 or 4 erotic writers ever. I only see you moving up. I’ve skipped around reading your stories randomly but have every intention of reading them all. What a treat !! One of the easiest 5-😊😊😊😊😊’s ever. ❤️