All Comments on 'Loving Brother Ch. 01'

great start can't wait to read whats next

Great start. I'm looking forward to more of this story. Not usually an analysis fan but something about this one has me hard and impatient. Please don't make me wait too long for next installment.

killer story !

a reader in Maine

Hard to imagine that Cal didn't start jacking while Terry did the brush handle thing. He might have cum in the towel as she was coming down, and would see him blow a huge load in the towel. She would have wanted to sniff ant maybe taste - maybe from the source. That would be her memory as she wakes from her nap in Ch.2.

pussy doesn't eat, it gets eaten you Yanky Doodles..

you get 5 stars. why are all the stories on this site with the younger innocent sister, .Everyone I know it is the older sister with the ripe pussy.

I love this! Sexy as hell!

I loved it!!!!

and im not a big fan of anal

This story is so hot. I loved it.

Awesome! Thought brother was going to wuss out for a minute there,rofl.

Usually I like a slow build up but this was perfect. Although there wasn't much about her I felt like the character was well developed.

asianToy

If you're waiting for the brother to fuck her pussy, it never happens. Only anal.

VERY hot story. Maybe I enjoyed it so much because I grew up with two of the most gorgeous sisters you could ever imagine. One was a thin brunette with a body like a gymnast while the older one was blonde with all the curves in all the right places. I spent half my childhood either peeking at them or having filthy fantasies about them and their friends.

Very good story!

Nice one. I like stories where they use each other to satisfy their Ragin hormones.

Lovely premise.

Nicely told.

Goou, slowbuildup.

Five stars.

Love your writing. Great beginnings.