by RedHairedandFriendly
DC:
This is among the best you've done and when you do it you do it well. Thank You. Ronnie W.
for continuing this story. It is a very erotic tale that you have written so very well
I like this story. For one thing, as a new reader on this site, I like that it is really a story, not just an excuse for an erotic scene. I would like to see more of the conflict that has led to this threesome, but hopefully that will be in the next installment. Also, the idea of silence as an enhancement to lovemaking is intruiguing.
Thank you for sharing
Cedar
As always Red, you amaze me!! You are such a great writer and a wonderful person! Please don't ever give up on this writing!!!
Quite a good story, however, there is a difference between "Death" and "Deaf". There were a couple of other spelling errors also.
Good Luck,
Senior Citizen
I loved this story. Not only was it very well written, but the subject so unusual. Thought it was wonderful to see so-called handicapped people portrayed as normal sexual people rather than as some fetishistic object. Great job, hon.
I loved the touch- and sight-oriented sensory details that gave this a ring of authenticity. The cultural comments were good too.
A side note about ASL classes: earplugs are a start, but they barely make you HoH--the best I've found only cut sound by 29 dB. Hearies (like me) need to not just wear earplugs, but also chew on something crunchy in order to REALLY be deaf! :-)
Thanks again for the story, and I hope you continue it.