All Comments on 'Loving Moms Ch. 02: In the Dark'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

Why stop there? Damn that was so good

Eric_ShiftEric_Shiftover 7 years ago
Another family getting together.

I see how this is working now.

Sort of an anthology.

Looking forward to more.

g912493g912493over 7 years ago
The Story had its good points but.................

The story has nany good points but every time you had that whiny wimp ass say something it pissed me off. I know its only a story but good stories evoke emotions, this one was just short of pissed off. Geezzz he did nothing but whine went he caught her fucking someone in his bed, he sulked for months, gave her most of his assets, lost his job and it goes on & on. If that's not the definition of a wimp, nothing is. I'm not saying he should have BTB but he could have done something to get her attention about right & wrong. But then again, as wimpy as this guy is maybe she was right to dump his ass.

ansdguyansdguyover 7 years ago
I have to agree...

Glen's constant overreacting and whining, then appologizing was agrivating as Hell. It made this story far less erotic. 4 stars.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
That was hot.

I am not the grammar police. I loved the storyline.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
W.O.W. I just love it!!

I just looooove these kind of stories - especially this! Can't believe such erotic incest stories can be written. Amazing. When are you gonna update?? Just amazing.

curiousboy40curiousboy40over 7 years ago

pretty good, hope there's more. i especially hope Glen's mom will be more loving with her son. Stacy is already a great gal, and no idea about Ava. But his mom should be softer with him now that they fucked,

this is so hot!

nashman1000nashman1000over 4 years ago
Loved it

Great story. Wish we could see more with the characters!

petskunkpetskunkalmost 3 years ago

I have enjoyed your stories but I have a difficulty with them in general. You have your characters yelling and shouting even when inappropriate. I suggest you use a thesaurus to find alternatives. Still gave you a five.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

it one of my favorites

GrandEagle53GrandEagle53over 1 year ago

Mom is nothing but a cock tease. Should never have had a child.

dirtysondirtyson3 months ago

damn imagine if he got all 3 pregnant by the end!

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