by bob03567
I see how this is working now.
Sort of an anthology.
Looking forward to more.
The story has nany good points but every time you had that whiny wimp ass say something it pissed me off. I know its only a story but good stories evoke emotions, this one was just short of pissed off. Geezzz he did nothing but whine went he caught her fucking someone in his bed, he sulked for months, gave her most of his assets, lost his job and it goes on & on. If that's not the definition of a wimp, nothing is. I'm not saying he should have BTB but he could have done something to get her attention about right & wrong. But then again, as wimpy as this guy is maybe she was right to dump his ass.
Glen's constant overreacting and whining, then appologizing was agrivating as Hell. It made this story far less erotic. 4 stars.
I just looooove these kind of stories - especially this! Can't believe such erotic incest stories can be written. Amazing. When are you gonna update?? Just amazing.
pretty good, hope there's more. i especially hope Glen's mom will be more loving with her son. Stacy is already a great gal, and no idea about Ava. But his mom should be softer with him now that they fucked,
this is so hot!
I have enjoyed your stories but I have a difficulty with them in general. You have your characters yelling and shouting even when inappropriate. I suggest you use a thesaurus to find alternatives. Still gave you a five.