All Comments on 'Lucille and Mrs. Miller'

by MaryGrangerx

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AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Romantic

There is an element of romanticism permeating throughout the story, which only gets resolved in the closing lines.

This story - actually, the whole series - is a veritable Rembrandt of erotica!

lorencinolorencinoover 8 years ago
Yes, Romantic

Erotic, incestuous, and loving, caring, supportive. As they expose their fantasies, Lucille and Brucie are met with loving reassurance and that makes it so very safe to be aroused and orgasmic. Within the world of this story I feel totally at peace with my need to stroke myself and hold myself in a state of heightened arousal throughout the entire story. Thank, you MaryGrangerX I'm now going to take myself to orgasm without any sense of guilt.

atlvoyeur69atlvoyeur69over 8 years ago
Love these tales

The story has now moved over to the Incest area and continues to be amazing. This reminds me somewhat of the old "My Secret Life" book from the early days of porno. It has that old time feel even though it is basically contemporary.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Fam.

When I was 8years old.My Dad got married a good woman.So when I turned 13 I would start looking at her in a different way.She was blonde and had long hair and She started looking real sexy to me.She was only 33 and she always wore short skirts.I would watch her bend over and I could see her panties.Then at times she would wea short tops.and I could see her cleavage and tits with no problem.She was hot.I USE TO GO IN THE LAUNDRY AND GET THE PANTIES SHE JUST WORE AND I WOULD SNIFF THE CROTCH AND I COULD SEE WHERE SHE HAD A LITTLE CUM STAINS IN THEM.I WOULD LICK THE CROTCH AND TASTE HER CUM ON THEM AND IT TASTED GREAT.EVERYDAY I WOULD SNIFF AND LICK HER PANTIES.AND SOME TIMES SHE WOULD LAY IN HER BED WITH JUST A SHIRT ON.I went in her room one day and she was sleeping.And I removed the sheets off her real slow and she was naked from the waist down.I looked at her and she had the hottest ass and pussy I've ever seen.I wanted to lick her ass and cunt so bad.When she woke up I couldn't help myself and kept looking at her all the time. We had a party at our house.And everyone got real drunk.She went in her room and took off her clothes.the only thing she had on was a real skimpy nightie.I made sure where everyone was..And I locked the doors so nobody could get in the house.Then I went back to her room and tried to wake her up.I knew she drunk alot of liquor and I started moving her and she just laid there.I said fuck it she's naked and so hot that I started licking her cunt slowly and she didn't move.So I licked it more and I was putting my tongue in far as I could and licked her real good.She still didn't wake up and I then licked her ass real good.I could tell that she came a little bit she was wet .I licked her ass for about a half hour.Then I got out of the bedroom and went back to the party.I was so happy.I couldn't keep my eyes off her for years.I always wanted to suck her pussy again but I never wanted to get caught.I was very happy I licked her pussy and ate her ass I was satisfied.I kept on licking her panties all the time and I loved it until I moved out.It was the best woman I ever tasted.Thanks for liquor I got to lick her !!#

bigdnc13bigdnc13over 8 years ago
HUH!!

You've already written a story with this title, which isn't finished. Is this a rewrite or din you have a brain freeze?

MaryGrangerxMaryGrangerxover 8 years agoAuthor
Wrong Title

I am very sorry about the title. I should have added PART 06 to the last one. I am not sure how to correct that.

Mary

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago

Great Story Mary! go on...

bobbipink53bobbipink53over 8 years ago
Hot Story

This series is getting hotter and hotter and this one is the best yet. I'm really looking forward to the next part......

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Erectile!

More powerful than any lotion, potion, cream or whatever.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Too familiar!

Sounds just like the kind of things my wife and daughter enjoy so much doing. Not that they let me, of course, being "only" the stepfather. Rather, with the "real" one on visiting days once a month or so. And then rush home all giggly and tingly to talk about it and tell me. Just to make me crave them more.

HOT HOT HOT HOT

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Hot story

Another hot story from a really hot bitch. As long as you keep writing I'll continue jerking off for you.

shoeslayershoeslayerabout 8 years ago
Another great story!

Very different and VERY HOT!

Sharing pics and undies with husbands friend,

then telling Mom and dad about your fantasies

and having them cum to real life, YUP, Mary

knows how to tell a story!

GrampervGrampervabout 8 years ago
Sizzling

Brilliant. I can't say more.

woodseaveswoodseavesalmost 8 years ago
Lovely fantasies

Thank you for the wonderful story of sharing the naughty fantasies among Lucille's famiy and neighbours. I love the restrained, patient storytelling, iplaced in such a respectale setting. t really builds up the tension. Aso the eplicit refences she makes to her dirty panties and big hairy cunt as she talks to her father. A great start to the series, I know I'll enjoy reading on

daddy1950daddy1950almost 8 years ago
Wow!

Love the respectable Lucille losing her inhibitions.

mousemoonwalkmousemoonwalkover 7 years ago
Excellent

Great build up to all your stories. Well written and a joy to read. You put a lot of authors on this board to shame. Please carry on the good work.

RegretsRegretsabout 7 years ago
The effortless crossing of boundaries and a warm feeling

This is such fun, ticking off all the taboos. I would like it if we sometimes heard about "dicks"- it seems more immediate. I do like "knickers" and not "panties" and I live in dread of someone calling knickers "her underpants" or other Americanisms like the dreadful "butt"

It is so lovely, reading a Mary story. One is made warm and comfortable and is given a ringside seat to watch some very strange goings on indeed.

ShyTammyShyTammyalmost 7 years ago
I Love this

The way you build tension between polite society and their dirty activities so so amazing. I love the pace you are developing this story, this made me extremely horny, and now I am all warm and tingly. The anticipation is amazing. Thank you!!

PaulwilliamPaulwilliamover 6 years ago
Wow

Another great story from Mary

Such a horny ending very hard now

AnonymousAnonymousabout 5 years ago
Hot

You're a very hot writer, bitch. Your readers know your cunt is just as hot as your stories. That's why there's so many of us who come back again and again, cock in hand, to jerk off and give you FIVE HOT RED STAR H's.

Write more, bitch, more and more.

YOU'RE THE BEST!

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