All Comments on 'Lucky Charm'

I forgot to mention, this is for the April Fool's Contest. As always, your votes and comments are much appreciated.

Terrific work. I don't usually jump on the "wrong category" bandwagon but this would be huge in the romance category. Very likable characters and a happy ending.

Great story!

And I can't believe I just read the hottest story around!

Good luck in the contest!

Cheers

SAGE

Great, enjoyable.

Excellent story. Thank you!

Cute story. I'm confused with the category selection.

Good job well written

What a sweet, well-written story, with lots of twists and turns. Kudos to the author for spinning such a wonderful tale!

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Nice story…thank you.

Nice twist on the ending where you seemed to be telegraphing the whole story that she would win the lottery.

I really enjoyed it though the end was pretty predictable.

I enjoyed this a lot .Thank you very much.

Very nice!

While this does qualify as MATURE, I do agree with ROB_ROYALE. This easily fits into romance. It’s essentially a Hallmark story with fucking.

NIce story. VERY predictable. Ending was VERY rushed I thought..

Delightful story!

5

Sweet story, S&F! I was going to say something about the odds of Cait being the boy’s teacher AND winning the prize but you took a nice turn with that in the end. Glad it works out so well for them. * * * * *!

Very pretty and heartfelt story. Nice to see a story with happiness all around.

Nice simple love story, for a change, nicely written and thought out.

I really enjoy stories like this one, particularly when they're cleverly thought out and well-written. Great job.

This was a sweet and lovely little romance. Like the other commenters, I liked the slight twist you put on the ending, subverting the expectations that you'd set up with Cait buying the ticket. I also thought the conversations with Luke were really cute. Five stars. Thanks for a fun read!

Corny as hell but sweet!

Beautiful story. Believable characters and the lovemaking was tasteful.

I was expecting a bigger surprise twist at the end, but the twist you supplied was very satisfying, and a solid closure for the story. ★★★★★

With all the screewed up stuff going on in tbe world now your story is like a breath of fresh air even though it is all made up. Great job on it

So lovely, and a great twist on an obvious ending. thank you!

(4/1/2024) I love a well-written love story; five stars and on my list.

Got to love a great love story !

Beautiful story