by Mentalcase
It has been a very enjoyable read so far! Was going to say it was taking too long for Kelly and Duncan to really fool around with other characters, but judging from this chapter's ending, Heidi is probably going to be the first one. A scene with both Molly and Dana would be awesome.
I like this story and Kellys transformation to naughty wife but still in love with her husband and maybe that guy Malcolm will be her first fling anyway hope that more will come soon.
I am so enjoying the tempo of this story..it's been about two months or so since the started and the progression is subtle but consistent.
It has the feel.of being real as in this is how a hot couple are made. Looking forward to further descent into debauchery. I just wonder if there's going to be any mistakes made that cause problems for them..
The temptations are great for both and so far communicating has help keep things steady. What if one failed to tell the other something. Like she ran into malcom and fooled around abit like in earlier chapters when they started she could take for granted that she had the "ok" to do some things that they first started with like flashing or acting flirtatious. Keep it rolling mental case it's really good.
I like the way you have gradually increased their level of sexuality while having great characters. I was really hoping to see Kely and Kara do a secret swap, but not now.
I've been reading your works, and this is my favorite so far. It gets me hard every time Kelly is on scene, especially from a shy girl slowly turning into a slut.
We all know that Kelly is on the way on being shared to other guys. I just hope that the communication between Kelly and Duncan is still strong later on.
Because I have accidentally read the comments on later chapters that they had changed significantly, well I hope that it still suits my tastes.
The chemistry between our power couple is through their communication between each other, for example, how they tell each other how they felt after every sexual encounters, this what makes this series of yours apart from others, I wish this continue to be the case.