All Comments on 'Lucky Man Ch. 16'

Found this story a few months back and have been patiently waiting for an update, it did not disappoint. Look forward to the next one.

Please, please, please continue this story! It is by far the best story I've read here on Literortica!

if Duncan and Kelly had Kara move in when she lost her apartment. Duncan would of been a really lucky man.

web site viewers loved Kelly, imagine Kelly and Kara together and what Camille

could of done with them.

why was Duncan progressing into more watching and photos than playing ?

I saw some early comments that you must have deleted. They were from people who obviously don't get it. Mentalcase, you are writing a story that most of us can only dream about. All your characters are fully fleshed out and realistic. The fun they all have together, with no anger or jealousy, is the stuff I dream of. I love my wife more than anything else in the whole world, but she's pretty vanilla. Please keep up the great work. I always look forward to more of your stories, actually all 3 of your current series: Duncan and Kelly, Alex and Toni, and Emily and Dakota.

duncan is becoming zeke

God sucking cock and swallowing is what he does best, especially when the filthy scumbag punished a good man like me for no reason at all. Go figure.