All Comments on 'Luna's Angel Ch. 01-06'

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tjb50caltjb50calalmost 7 years ago
awesome

great starting chapter, looking forward to many more please

The_Crazy_OneThe_Crazy_Onealmost 7 years ago

Wow this is a different take on your stuff before. More please.

PoisonlovePoisonlovealmost 7 years ago
Loved it!!!

A whole new story which is totally different from your style. Excellent job as always!!!

Pmc75Pmc75almost 7 years ago
Yes awesome story

50 more chapters please

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Hoooohooohooooly SHIT!

This is gonna be fuckin' EPIC!

And yes. 50 more chapters, at least.

No pressure.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
welcome back

glad your writing again great start sitting on edge for the next parts

catman71catman71almost 7 years ago
love it

your sort of used a idea I had( serving the council , involving gods, ) but did it much better, I like Luna Elizabeth's humor, and I have inkling of where this story might go, but I await each instalment to see if you and I are thinking on same line , now to await those chapters

OddBall68OddBall68almost 7 years ago

Wondered when it would finally come over here.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Make more chapters please

More chanpters

nreh21nreh21almost 7 years ago

Cant wait till your next chapter, I'm checking every day, please share soon.

txcrackertxcrackeralmost 7 years ago
Another Wonderful Series Has Started !

Having read all of your series with the exception of Stolen Birthright ( which I read up until the father was killed by a "friendly" pack ) I know I missed some good parts but I was heartbroken by that action .

Where as this series is starting out to be very interesting and of your usual strength and kindness , Thank you .

Another 5*'s as usual for your work .

Thanks for the read .

tx cracker

ZZchromosomeZZchromosomeabout 6 years ago
Enjoying This

"She stared at the missing parts, finally looking up. "So they made you a Ken doll?" "I prefer GI Joe Action Figure, with wings and a wolf,"

Classic. Reminds me of the classic Eddie Murphy SNL skit of the Michael Jackson doll... "Mhm, thought so."

evonnaevonnaover 5 years ago
Liking it.

Hey, really enjoying your stories, it's nice to read a male writer voice in werewolf fiction. There's a nice 'getting to the point' -edness with your style :) which is cool.

(detail: little confused about how some people die, like the rogue whose dick was bitten off... wouldn't he have survived, and healed to continue living (without dick :) )

Anyway, liking your stuff.

Thanks for taking the time to write all this.

frazodfrazodover 1 year ago

I really liked this.

My only issue is with the God only being allowed 1 million followers, even with 1 werewolf(?) being evil per generation, she will eventually lose all followers.

I know this is an older story, that just struck me as odd.

AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

Love "so help me you". Nice little touch.

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