by ffarkus
is not shocked by gam's little talk with her before she leaves for a month.
make moms his slut and spank that ass.how long before this story is ready.
Yep, I'm ready for mom and sis as well to join him and gam in bed.
that was hot! i liked how you paced the sexual tension, to go along with their lust for each othe. continue thsi please. mom might be even better than gam.
Well written...and thought out...not just sex action...expressed feelings ...a sequel of the same calibur would be appreciated by all.
Very glad that you are back!
More pleaase...!!!
But more Gam before the mom joins in.
I love the way in which the sexual encounters gradually increase in intensity.....can't wait for whats in store for mum
Very exciting and the build up was excellent. Hope you continue.
Thanks for writing.
I am amazed how well you write I could not put it down so top speak! Keep it up Love the silk and satin of it all
Nicely written, please expand on the story some more when grandma returns. Also take off on the tangent with the mother, may even lead to him getting sister as well.
This is a very good and HOT story, gram doesnt give in to easy and that is most likeley. most storys are just to easy on giving away on a famaly member or lover. he has to work for the price box.
exelent looking fwd for the follow up.
This is a well written, very exciting adventure! Before Gam leaves we need more and how Gam introduces Mom in to the play!
Keep it up!
Yes! Please! Continue with the story line. It was soooo hot!
...ROCKS! Works for me big time. I'm seeing a very hot "granny". Same attitude...same volcanic libido. Thing is...older women just want it more...generally speaking. And...they can be very...grateful. The idea in the story about grandma not having the most romantic marriage anymore, is for the most part, dead on true. Rock on Gran, and for damn sure...let's have the sequel...SOON!
Freat to see you back with a HOT, HOT new story. Based on your previous work (MSH), I can't wait to see how things go with Mom (& maybe Sis). Any chance Grandma has a younger sister somewhere to add to our young man's stable of excitement? Waiting anxiously for Part 2.
You touch on a lot of things I've always wondered about. Is incest anything more than what we've been taught? I've enjoyed exploring your writings. If you're looking for an "editor", I'd like to help. You're writing is very good, but there is the occasional thing that slips through. I'd like to help you make it perfect.
budweyzer@hotmail.com
WOW, HOT, it makes the boy in all males want to enjoy the pleasure's of their own Grandmother and then to have Grandmother offer to help serve your Mother up on a silver platter for your desires as well... "Damned", you have got to finish that part of the story also LFG just would not be finisher with out it... PLEASE finish the story...
BillyF.
I love the way you write.. Your stories are amazing. Waiting for the sequel impatiently. Thanks.
This is by far the best "Grandmother" story I have ever read. It is well paced and believable, and wonderfully well written. You asked for comments on a possible sequel, featuring 'Gam's'daughter, your mother. I think you should do it, and do it with a vengeance, with your"Gam" helping you to get into your Mom. I have read two of your other story lines and noticed that you never seem to include having your 'Mom character' go down on you. It would make an interesting new story line if in the sequel to the 'Gam' story, Gam helps you seduce your mom and you start her out by eating out her pussy until she faints, and then bring her to by pumping yourself off in her mouth. From there, andything else is possible in your story line, including doing her on her back, doing her doggie style, doing her in the shower, and using a shower to do her in the ass.
Anyway, good luck and continued good writing.
Papa Golf
loved your story and love the way you write. Plz make a sequal!
please continue the story with the mother geting involve
Good story line...Hot sex...what more could you ask for?
Nice writing from one M/s incest author to another...
The Baron
Good story line...Hot sex...what more could you ask for?
Nice writing from one M/s incest author to another...
The Baron
One of the best of the best I've read yet. Would really like to see asequel. It's got to be as hot as as this. I'm going back to read more of your submissions. thank you.
Yes. I would love to read your stoty about this young lad and his mother. Then it will be Mom and Gam and Lad. You have a lot to write about.
This was such a great incest tale, it just cries out for the sequel. You have a real talent for telling this type of tale. Thanks for sharing your stories.
I am 68 years old and I don't think I have ever read anything as erotic in my life,and I have read a lot as you can imagine...
God knows what you could do as a Porno film producer/director.
Thanks for that,especially as my eighty year old Mother in Law is coming over for a few days...mind you my wife might wonder what has activated me during the coming nights!
defo you must follow this up with another story this was to hot to finish like that ......
Excellent story, superbly written. Please do follow up with the Mother/Son story, and who knows where that will lead?
i was hard throu the whole story
I am still hard after reading this 4 times. It's a 3 jerk off per read story.
I'd love to read the sequel to this. Great descriptions and like the way you built up to the sex.
Please write the sequel. This story was breathtaking. I loved every minute of it.
it was a most satiesfying read could not stop till i finihed wish their was more to read.hope you continue with the story.i await with anticipation
I have never read an incest like this, it was like i was watching a real life movie. I almost cum in my pant reading it.
This was a fantastic story had me hard through out the whole story.looking forward to MoM getting it on
Well, it looks like Gam needs to light a fire under you to get the ball rolling on the follow up to this story. We are all looking forward for a contuation of this story
This is one of the best I have read onthis site! Please write more!
I would enjoy reading how he not only gets Mom andf Sis but they somehow find out about each other as the women get into lesbian affairs with each other. Don't forget Grandma would have to be that organizes each encounter with him. The women will be convinced to screw him by grandma's tongue as she brigs out her hidden desire for women. First her daughter and then her grandaughter
Very impressive, totally enjoyable story. Like others who've posted their comments I too would love to read the sequel, although I appreciate that such good writing takes a lot of time and effort. If you can make that time I for one would be very grateful.
I loved the story and could not stop reading until the end. Please continue with Gam, and Mother. Separate and then together.
...FIVE STARS!!!!>>>>I yanked off a dozen or more times with GAMS all over me in every position and orifice!!!..SHE IS SO HOTTT!!! Yes, get MOM involved, and some anal action, describe how they love his 14" long, 4" wide cock and his tennis ball sized balls that hang to his knees....along with threesome actions, and Gam and Mom also sneaking privately off with him for private sessions/competition for his services/affections...let sis stay totally unaware of all of this...Outstanding reading and preparation and execution...keep up the good work...!!!
Great story to jack off to. Once he got his cock in his grandmother, he gave her a stimulating fucking. It was perfect that he shoved his cock into her cunt all the way when he shot his load. Anyone who doesn't get a hard cock while reading this just doesn't enjoy good incest stories. I JACKED OF AND IT FELT GREAT.
I jerked off at least 15 times will reading this. I am so sore from jerking off but I am still hard. I think I will read it again and jerk off again
...ask VANNA WHITE or HEATHER TESCH!!!...once you go BLACK...!!!...VANNA is DEEP into the NBA and NFL players...STALLIONS...!!!...and she chooses a different one each time!!!...as does Heather!!!...they're both hooked on the BLACK HORSE MEAT!!!...for years now!!!...YOU GO GIRLS!!!...AND TAKE GAMS WITH YOU!!!...she's one HOT number...and will welcome the LONG THICK HEAVY MEAT OF HER BLACK ADONISs...!!!...with her talent...she could be 'owned' by MANY BLACKS!!!...and cucold her grandson...when she finds out the beauty of being OWNED by all the BLACK MEN she can have...please write this into this XXXcellent tale...!!!
Loved it. Suggest you could enhance the cumming with a more graphic description of the semen and pussy nectar flowing. But, well done. Very keen to read of his intimacy with his Mother. Gets her pregnant too perhaps?
Thanks for a terrific story. The slow build up was far better than many stories that go straight into the action.
Please let us have a sequel as soon as you can take the time. The thought of Gram introducing her daughter to incest with her grandson is tantalising.
The SEX is VERY HOT in this tale of a young man too shy even to take a girl out without gushing about his virginity. And the premise doesn't disgust me. But for Pete's sake get editing help to comb out the dumb mistakes in vocabulary ("cull-de-sack" is flat stupid) and grammar, such as using "lied" as the past tense of "lay," which should be "lie" in the first place. Being a horny imaginer is fine -- but you HAVE to write carefully to make it work.
this story was beautiful , so much passion it drove my gf and i wild
Never knew my Grandmother but I hade always prefered mature women from my mothers age up... If I had only had a grandmother like this one, "WOW", what a time we could have had... PLEASE continue on with Gam helping him with his mother... HOT!!!
Oh please write a sequel. I enjoyed this story so much,that I'm willing to even pay for the sequel!!! That's how great it was to me!!!great job!
I'am 62 years old My jone was so hard, it shoot off by itself, it haven't did that since I was 16, and I have had many women, ffarkus you are off the hook, don't waste no more time, get on it, please include reluctant anal between both woman whooo weeee.
This is one of my all time favorite m/s stories. Please write a sequel including Mom!
im sorry to have to break it to you guys and it pains me when i write that there probably wont be a contination of this wonderfull story, I mean, this story was posted here in late 2006 and nothig else have heen put on ffarkus works since then. Im really sorry because I really liked this story and wanted a sequel
wow.....great story...one of my favourites.....please dont stop this series....i hope u ll continue dis...pleaseeee...
please continue this story, it's great writing and very erotic. I, for one, can't wait to find out what happens with his mom and gam
What a stud!
From virgin to lasting for so long on his first encounter. I suppose it has happened but I feel it most unlikely.
I skimmed through the last two pages cos you had already said it all.
This premise definitely interests me. I want to see if he gets Mom. Dont wait too long, write a sequel.
Yes.. Yes.. Don't Leave Us Hanging.. Great Write. Nice Cliff Hanger.
Am certain it will be very enjoyable - tantalize us more with another story, please
I loved it. I had sex with my grandmother, but it took years, and was never acknowledged afterwards. I wish it had been more like this.
This a turly preffinal & erotic story.
A Sewqrl is essentail.
This story could g on & on
GRANNY GOT HERS! NOW MOTHER SHOULD GET HERS! WRITE MORE.
I couldn't stop reading your story. It was way above a 10.
Please write the next stage of your incestuous jorney.
Make sure Mum gets her share. She probably is aware of your spell with GRAM. Great stuff.
Doug_F
I loved this beautifully written, excellent story. If you can make time to write a sequel involving Grandma and Mother, as the final paragraphs imply, I for one would be delighted and very grateful.
Oh, and just for the avoidance of doubt - PLEASE make that time - PLEASE!
Excuse me whilst I go and throw a bucket of cold water on my head.
Yes please,this was the most exciting story/fantasy I have ever read.You are on the right track.Can't wait to read the follow up. Thank you again.
Adding mother to the game, should make further excersizes, more secure.
Hello...i had to stop reading this to do work..but i saved the best for last...it was nicely written and held my suspense. You could easily write more and be as well recieved...damn is it done yet lol
my friend please more about this family, i´m very interesting in the mother story.
GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO! GO!
bring mom into the picture would perfect. Son,mom and gam would be brilliant mmmm
Damn you know how to write!, I always say
go for the older ladies, they know what they
want and how to get it. This story is FREAKIN HOT
I am saving it on desktop and backing it up as well.
Thanx 4 a humping good read!
This story is so hot & wel writtenmm sequel is def in order,, 3 some would be good,, mayube the whole family couols brcom en volvev
This story is awesome.. I've never read such a story where they got at it like rabbits, I had to stop myself from touching myself numerous tines,
It goes into such detail about there feelings!
I hope you write a story about his mother!!
This is the very 1st time Ikve ever commented on a story. This type of story isnt even my thing, well till now. Im all about the mom-son or aunt-nephew. I clicked on this by accident and figured why not, Ill just read it. SO GLAD I DID..10. Its makes me wish I had a sexy horny grandmother. Thanks for introducing me to a new interest.
a good story takes as long to build up to the crescendo as it does to get to it's point. this illicit affair between grandmother and grandson seemed to take much longer to get to what everyone knew was coming than the time spent extrapolating on the emotions of their lusty adventures together. but, still... i thought it was well written, and, i enjoyed it.
An interesting premise and one hell of an idea. Would like to see how you would continue this story. I for one would like to see if he can get Mom involved. By all means continue this story line. Want to see how it eventually turns out.