All Comments on 'Mac and Me'

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A lovely story! (Although you might want to run an eye over the couple of paragraphs below, then revise and resubmit...)

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"A few years back, ee bought a nice house way out in the sticks, with plenty of room and few neighbors, which is just the way we like it.

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We had quite a fright last year when Mac had a health scare, and for a while it wasn't looking too good, but thankfully for both of us everything worked out well. A life with Mackenzie is not something I ever want to deal with."

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Again though, just lovely - and I really did cry like an idiot towards the end.

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xx

... to the first commentor who correctly noted the typo ee which should have been we, and the 'with' that should have read 'without', and these will be corrected ASAP.

The sexual content of the story is insignificant. Whether it be two guys, a male and a female or in this case two females. What is there is a incredibly well crafted romance story that gave me great satisfaction, so much so the tears are still damp on my cheeks.........

Thankyou so very much for the pleasure that you have brought me with your story......

Mike...........

Not what I normally read when I come here, but I loved it!

This type of story is why I come to Literotica. I really like romance, coupled with a gentle and positive storyline. Superb!

I usually pass over the Lesbian category and don't know what brought me here...You were right at the beginning...this is a great love (Romance)story. It matches the quality of "Alex the Kat"s story.."Shelter in the Storm"...and that is meant as a compliment.

Red blooded male here, but I found it touching sweet. My only regret is I hit only one star and Literotica's system wouldn't let me change it! this is a 5 star story!!!

What a wonderful story! It was so warm that one could feel the caring and the passion with which it was written. I could feel Mac's love for Abby coming from the page. I wish I owned a movie studio because it would make a wondrous love story and one that would become a classic. This story must become part of that Literotica favorites section. Thanks for sharing your inspiration :)

After I wrote my comments, I felt that they could be misconstrued. Let it be clear, no sarcasm involved, I truly loved this story.

Wonderful love story.Thanks for sharing this story .

I have been reading these stories for years. I am normally pretty harsh judge on stories, so I give very few fours (4) to a story. If was a great pleasure to give this a five (5). Wish it could have been more.

Wonderful story.I especially liked the part about the mum and the epilogue.

Should inspire all the wall flowers out there.Bravo.Encore.

So erotic...what's not to love... Thanks

This is exactly the kind of gem I love finding on this website.

Well written and great story line. A delight to read.

from the beginning, you had me hooked. and as your story threaded its way to the ending i wanted it to have, i started to cry from happiness. very touching, very sweet, very beautiful. you're an amazing writer, and i hope you continue to share your stories with us.

This is one of my favorite stories. I have come back and read it more than once. When one sees something of ones self in a story it adds meaning. Thank you for writing such a dear, touching story.

there wasn't enough love if that makes scence. I just didn't do it for me, sorry.

That came in to read a story to get off, and stuck around for the sweet romance. Great story!

Thank you for such a well-written, inspiring love story. Brilliant!

wow.. i love your story a lot! really. even if i don't understand each word, because my english is not the best one. thank you.

Absolutely beautiful, the characters are depicted so well I feel like I've known them for years. Bravo!

No matter how many times i read good romances, they make me either cry or laugh out loud. For me it's the telltale sign of quality, if they make me feel something. I wept like a doggy with this one, so you have my five stars.

I loved this story from the beginning because I'm from schenectady and I lived in the stockades then I moved to watertown!! small world!! only got better as it went on!

This is one of my fave stories here.

I'm such a sucker for a good old love story. *sigh*

Absolutely beautiful story. Thank you for brightening my day!

Fuckin' beautiful story.

Damnit, you made me cry! Beautiful story, fantastic.

fuckn awesome yo 4 real

Yes, we certainly need more stories like this one. It's a lovely tale, a real winner. It's the kind of story that other writers would read and think: "I wish I had written this one." I know I did.

This abby grl reminded me of my ex girlfriend

Jst wish tht my grl hd the strength of abby in her to fight herself nd face the world

And a beautiful one at that. I love everything about it, the characters, Abby's discovery, her and McKenzie's courtship...such love, that you can't help but root for them. The writing style and flow of the story is classic. Job well done

I come back to this story every once in a while, just to remind myself how charming and touching it is. I reckon all of your readers owe you something for the sheer pleasure that 'Mac and Me' brings. For me, the best of the best.

This is one of the most wonderful, loving, and excellent writtren story, an in-dept look at a satuation and a nice job of exploring the felling and thoughts associated with it.

...from the beginning to the end. Thanks for writing it.

Loved it!!!!

awesome story.fast enough,the comical turns, the romance, just perfect.

So much love and life and romance in this story! thank you so much for sharing it with us!

Loved every word... An honestly good love story. Oh yeah, I do love happy endings as this one was.

And it is still as wonderful as it was the first time I read it. Thank you so much for sharing this story with us!

I've just re-read this story for the umpteenth time and as usual it got me right in the heart. A wonderful story, a little classic.

A love story that is well written and genuine. Well done!

A wonderful romantic love story. Thanks for sharing.

Loved the story! What made it hit home for me was the fact that I grew up in Fulton Co. and actually lived in Schenectady for several years before moving out of state about 2 years ago...It's so weird, but also great to know exactly what you are talking about. Thanks again!

Only question is what happened to friday happy hour. Something that important to last that long does't just stop after one night.

........ a stunningly simple and wonderful tale.

Cheers

Beautiful. A beatiful story wonderfully told; graciously and well written. 10 stars if I could give it. It is so beautiful I felt I ought to cry but it just left me feeling good. Thank you DavidWatts! Trace 🙂

I was reviewing the 'Hall of Fame' list for this category....'Lesbian Stories. ' I was disappointed not to see 'Mac and Me' not listed there. I have read many of the stories listed there. 'Mac and Me' should and deserves to be on that list!!! You should resubmit this for current readers to easily discover. I'm glad I did. Again this is a beautiful story, beautifully written. 🌷♥️ Trace

...with Trace_Waters. In my opinion, Mac and Me always has been one of the best short stories on this site and deserves all the kudos it can get.

I loved this story. Thank you.

This is a beautiful duckling to swan story. Thank you. I think it belongs more in “Romance” but what do I know? Classification matters less than quality, which this has in abundance.

A great story...loved the way it was written and the tale

Thanks

Very touching and compelling. Thanks. Hi