All Comments on 'Magician's Assistant Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 16 years ago
Good, Hope More Coming Soon

Titls says it all. Hope more chapters will be coming soon.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Nice

Where's the next chapter, I need more.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
hypnosis

always loved your hypnosis stories, it would be great if you could write some more, I like the juxtaposition between what the woman is thinking and what she is having to do reluctantly :)

DesireeFoxDesireeFoxalmost 11 years ago
they have always said

"They can not make you do anything you are not willing to do without hypnosis", well something along those lines. Basically she found it satisfying and did not wish to stop wild ride coming. Hope her James is as nice as mine is.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Wish she did not talk to herself

Very Good story but sometimes she talks to herself and it makes the story difficult to understand -- I found myself having to reread these sections repeatedly which detracts from the story.

Gaelic_SeanchaiGaelic_Seanchaialmost 8 years ago
Spell check and/or get an editor!

"Yes. It's part of my magic act. The finally." (Ch. 01/Pg. 01) Finally is not a substitute for finale!

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