All Comments on 'Maid in Heaven'

I can`t place it but this story is familiar.I`m sure I read it or something similar months ago.

Nice job. You brought out his/her emotions very well. His mom reminds me of someone I used to know, what a bitch. Keep writing.

posted before but I do not remember the author. Isn't this plagrisism?

This is not plagerism (or however it's spelled) You may have all read this post before, 2 ppl said it sounds familiar, all it is is simply a double post. I was thinking maybe chapter 2 but it is identical to one of the authors other posts, the name is just shortened. I must agree with 2nd post, it really is a great read.

Really really good... But needs a conclusion!

conclusion is minimum needed. or could be start of continuing saga of

'girl for rent' lol

You have shared an excellent story with us and I loved it. A wonderful fantasy fulfilled.

Guess I have to go searching to see if you've written any more about this as you've insinuated you might!!!

Berta 11-17-2014 1:12 AM EST

This reminds me of my time as a Bridesmaid, at my girl cousins wedding. My aunt and my girl cousin, told me more than one time, that I was much too pretty to be a boy, and a girl I should have been born. My mom and my two elder sisters agreed and so ended up that summer as a flower girl. When it came to bedtime, I had a wonderful surprise, as they all seemed to know I just loved wearing a dress, and being a girl, so auntie had me sleep in a nightie. From that night, mom also had me wear a nightdress to bed and a dress on the weekends.