by StoryTeller07
Where will this go next? Will the dude take her on permanantly?
More, More, More!!!! I love the story and its really good writing a few mistakes but they didn't detract from the story but other than that keep it up.
It was going well until the last chapter and then the confusing end.
A person that titles themself as "Story Teller" is always the exact opposite. Nobody would ever mistake them for one, so they have to tout themselves.
Vacuous, infantile, repetitive, long-winded, and a complete fabrication ignoring reality and delving into wishful, childish fantasy. Complete waste of time and effort.