All Comments on 'Mail Order Bride'

by barbarianqueen

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kathy6533kathy6533over 20 years ago
very, very sexy story

I would love a follow up sometime. Very erotic story. What woman wouldn't love that set up? I know I would. haha

MaxiJMaxiJover 20 years ago
powerful

This is a powerful well thought out piece of writing. I enjoyed reading it very much. Jane

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
A womans power is shown

Over the years I have found that women have a greater capacity for sexual needs, satisfaction, ect. if given the opportunity and encouragement of their significant other. The story is of one womans capacity for love and satisfaction without her being "slutty". If only we men would let all women enjoy pleasure as this woman did. If done right it wouldn't take six men. Just one very loving one! jcsne@sbcglobal. I forgot my password!

VayeneVayeneover 20 years ago
very nice

This did not go where I was expecting at all! That alone is delightful. I loved that she is strong and sure of herself, and I adore her new husbands. What a treat!

Please write more, lots more.

Regards

bdsmbillbdsmbillover 20 years ago
Another good non-stop tale.

Yep, I liked this one, too. You have an interesting style. I was beginning to think I was the only writer who avoided "backdoor" sex.

jackbxxxxjackbxxxxover 20 years ago
Another Great Story!

Great story! Well writen!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 20 years ago
incredible!

This was an awesome story! I am a writer in this site, and I do enjoy reading stories from a female point of view...You Go Girl!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Beautiful

I absolutely loved this story and I've never liked group sex, mainly because it comes across as cheap and dirty. Melea and the brother's story does not. They truly care for her and she them and it creates a beautiful story. Keep them coming.

P.S. More Silence and Eileen!!!

sacredpussysacredpussyabout 12 years ago
Volunteer

Great story. Too bad I could be her in real life! Sexy as hell of a story!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Again

I hope you continue

AnonymousAnonymous12 days ago

Top much violence here. The violence ruined the Story. The Woman ist being used as a Masturbator. I couldn't find anything erotic here.

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