All Comments on 'Majgen Ch. 005'

waiting for further developments, unfortunately i am not well versed in analysis & i don't lnow wnat kind of feedback would be useful to you... keep writing

Sorry people the full story will not be posted online. Don't start reading, contact me if you want word once it is available in book form, in the far future.

Intuitive brain functions are fascinating in regards to the separate Systems or subconscious as you call it. Really enjoying this story. Lol, you're right I'm going to miss it at the...not end.

Good use of dramatic enhancement to change tone and build tension