All Comments on 'Makin' It Even Pt. 02'

He doesn't seem to bright! He has been walking around naked with erections through out the story but the last day he is embarassed to take his shorts off? She has given him every sign that she is open to moving things forward and he acts like he no idea what she wants.Very disappointed in this chapter!

This is an amazing story in the making?

I've enjoyed the story so far...sexy,without being crude...seems a little slow paced at times though..in all,nice storyline. looking forward to part 3 soon

To that anonymous user below with the comment titled: "Idiot"...

Perhaps you should fix up your own grammatical errors before you call anyone else, even a story character, an idiot. (;

First - where does she go with her friends and leaves him out alone.like a total loser. Is she fucking her friends? They are only 2 years apart.

Second - he is a loser if he stays at home every night while his sister is out either fucking or eating PUSSY while he stays at home jacking off. Doesn't he have any friends?

Third - what an idiot. You are eating the tastiest pussy of your life and you stop. If your hand and fingers are tired, put your tongue in OVERDRIVE or take your hard cock and rub it on that PERFECT PUSSY. No penetration unless she says go.

If you don't fuck her. This story will be a ONE and my cock will be soft.

Unless they are both virgins, there's no point in taking this any further... The guy has always been an indoor guy. RIght?

It would be better if he had no girlfriend before.

It would be great if they "climb the stairs of adulthood together".

I've seen so many well written stories being ruined by mention of "you're the best I ever had", or "None of my girlfriends were ever this good".. I mean come on! If you want experience we could always go for a gigolo or a prostitute.

@prop69 you are one retarded motherfucker, when his sister leaves with her friends you have to think they are fucking, you dumb ass no one cares about your limp penis that is smaller than a cheerio you porn addict not everything has to be about porn loser why do you call some one a loser for not making your bitch ass happy. Does your fat ugly cousin not suck your small dick like daddy does that you have to complain sissyboy

So you started this by saying this was a two part series, but you say here it's continued in part 3, so which is it?

You just gave me cancer, using a word as ridiculous as "chesticles" without a hint of irony. Cancer, man. Uncool. Seriously though, part 3?

1 of the best i ve read till now....Pls continue it further

Tease. Hurry up with both this story and the other story you got going on.

Thoroughly enjoying both your stories. Looking forward to parts 6 and 3.

I've not heard that in years, thanks for the memory.

You really need to get someone to proofread your work, some of the errors are needless.

You've set up some good stories, I really hope you are going to finish them.

You left me hanging with a raging hard on. I was looking forward to how she massaged him.

You have a good start, I look forward to your next chapter, and hopefully several more after that.

Great story. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the awesome work.

I've really enjoyed reading your work. So far this story is my favorite. Any chance you'll be adding Part 3?

I look forward to reading anything else you produce. Keep up the awesome work!

Definitely needs to be a part 3

Parts 1 & 2 were pretty damned good, still waiting on part 3. Can't wait to see this continue.

You have a good story going even though the brother is a clueless dork! Also, I hate half stories. FINISH before publishing

I have the worst blue balls please continue

Please please please continue this

I’ve read each of your stories and have to admit that you’re my favorite writer on the site. I’d love to read about the rest of this story and any other new ones you’ve got going.

This story is epic. It needs a continuation, or atleast a proper ending.

There won't be a chapter 3. Readers beware. This author is a cock tease. I won't be reading any more of her stories. 1*

You really do need to finish this…

yeah I would really love to see a part 3

Still waiting and hoping for part three...

It's a fun read. Is there more?

agreed.. part three is a must. been waiting for years now.. lol. life does happen. thanks tho fr fr.. G status!