All Comments on 'Making Friends on Vacation'

Loved this - brought back so many memories of how we started down the sharing route a few years back. Thank you. (Mrs S)

Wow. This is one of the best stories I’ve read on here. I hope there will be a second part

This is an amazingly great story for your first attempt. super hot, nice story line and actually somewhat believable! Also I greatly appreciate the lack of typos and grammar issues! thanks!

Hope you write many more!

Cheers

A nice sensual story, looking forward to reading your next story

Just the way it should happen. High Five!

well done, you built the plot well

well done

you built the plot well

another story please

One of my favorites. Well done, especially for a first. Write more!

Great story, looking forward to the next one.

God damn that was a hot story!!! I kind of wished that happened to my partner and I when we went to Napa at a spa resort and met a hot African-American couple at the swimming pool. The couple looked like they were GGG as the wife was always openly grabbing her husband’s crotch. Shame my partner still hasn’t come out of her shell yet as it would have been fun trading spouses for one on one fun or wife sharing between us.

Oh God what could have been?…

Excellent. Believable build up, hot as hell pacing and a wonderful ‘we shouldn’t but can’t help ourselves’. We need more!

Excellent. Well written, great build up and hot finish. 5 stars.

Very good debut story. Well written and hot. Look forward to more stories.

Will they do more - does this experience herald the beginning of more’ adventures? Please write and tell us. Such an erotic story

Very hot and very good story I love it

First proper story that i could read over and over! What happens at breakfast please tell us

Brav-freaking-o!

Hell of a debut.

A sequel would be great, but more, similar stories would be even better.

That. Was. Hot!

Hot, yet believable and perfectly well-written. I hope you create more stories to share with the readers here.

Remarkable that this is the first submission attributed to this author. Very nicely done, sir. Please do it again frequently.

Please continue!

Great story. Like you, I just decided to write my first story on here after years of reading. I don't know about you, but I found that writing was even better than reading them. Much more rewarding. Keep it up.

WOW, That Is So Hot, & has Always been my ultimate fantasy.

I continue to wish for this whenever we go on holiday!!

Great story. This had everything: very erotic, great characters, fun, humorous, good pacing, the right amount of introspection. Look forward to more stories from you.

This doesn't need a sequel. In fact, that could diminish this one.

Damn that took me away from this world for a while. I will or must say that is the best story yes . Beautiful Believable Beyond the best ending ever. Thanks for the experience I appreciate your well written work.

Great story and very hot and romantic. Well written and a very believable story as well. Gman

Amazing, just totally brilliant, can I give more than 5 stars?

Please tell me you have chapter 2 in works at the moment??

So good.

Great story. Many thanks!

Very well done. I enjoyed your story immensely. I liked the gradually lead up to sex. It seemed very natural and fun.

I felt like Jim's focus changed slightly over the course of the pages. At first, it was about getting Jennifer to open up and do some exhibitionism and maybe more, then at some point it seemed like he more wanted to do Olivia than to watch Jennifer

Please tell me your working on chapter 2

Yes, please write a chapter 2.

What a great story! More fun the next installment!

OMG so hot!

You write well. I hope you’ll do more stories

Hawt story!!! It would have been nice if Jim and Ken had DPed Jennifer either double vaginal or double anal if she really drunk, horny and daring and both these men fill Jennifer up with their boiling hot cum in her holes!!!

With Olivia masturbating to this hot scene and then would also get DPed by both the same men who filled up Jennifer would also fill up Olivia! In the end both Jennifer and Olivia would have been dripping from both holes!

It was an awesome story, but would have been better if it had included a DP scene for both wives!

Perfect

Great story, hope there’s another one soon!

Please say you are busy writing a following chapter.

Just sooo well written and hot as hell! Thank you.

Well done story and very hot. Please write more.

Excellent! Could have just as easily been my wife and I.

Perfect from start to finish. Well crafted and well rounded characters that evolved organically. I loved how Jim wanted to watch his wife with another man, then get seduced by Olivia, only for Olivia to remind him of his true desire. And what a climax! Not too complicated, just emotional. And the last sentence... amazing. Bravo!

Holly Shit! Amazing!

Fucking fantastic story....AL

Fantastic story. Please write more describing the rest of their vacation.

Superb story, beautifully told and hot as hell. More please!

Oh, so very, very hot! I hope this is the first of many contributions here--absolutely stunning authorship!

What an amazing story. I agree with all the comments above, written so well. At one point while reading this story I forgot where I was and thought I was on vacation as well vicariously enjoy the feeling. Then I realized I was back home and had some skillfully been taken away on this vacation as well. The highest of compliments. please continue with more chapters and stores.

Well told, believable, and it is one with which we can identify. We hope to read more of your stories!

Well written, could totally see the situations, plus got me horny as.

Loved it;! Looking forward to reading more of the couples future fun

Awrsome

This is a very good story... and.. really well written,.. but it always makes me giggle when you men think you are in charge... never in a million years X X

Fantastic long story I love the build up to wife swapping.

We're going on an adult only vacation soon to a nice resort maybe I'll let her read this and give her some ideas

Awesome. Really appreciated the lack of typos and your perfect syntax. Please keep on!

Great writing, good dialogue with the whole group. Really enjoyed this.

Awesome story had my knickers wet

So hot!

Ex cel lent !

So hot! I cum twice reading this fingering my pussy

I wish there were more than five stars… Oh, and another chapter would be nice!

Well written

Need next chapter!!

one of the best I've read in years

My Mrs. ended our swinging in mid 2020 because of covid. (Both in our early 60's). Unfortunately our sexlife died a the same time. She's no longer interested. (think maybe covid was an excuse.)

This story brought back so many great memories.

She suggested swinging in 2005.

Now I'm just mad that it all ended so abruptly.

Great story... loved it!

What a great story, very well-written too…. When are you writing another?

If this is your only story, it will be the most memorable, most well-written solo effort on this site. Very well done.

A lot of humor that I enjoyed.

Well enough written that it didn’t distract from a credible and very hot story. THANK YOU!

Great story well written. Thanks

Great story. Excellent pacing to build up to the finale.

I see that you haven’t published anything in a year and a half. I hope it’s not one and done. This is great story and in my mind a great foundation for more.

with the last guy. This story was excellent, and I would very much enjoy reading another of your creations. Thank you for providing this enjoyable experience!

Perfect, wish I’d written it, love to read the next one

Perfect story for me & my Wife...love to see it happen on our next vacation!

Perfect, Best tale yet for my bride

Definitely a libido booster for me. More lease!

Good story, only thing missing was some anal play.