All Comments on 'Making The Sale'

You know just which buttons to press! Damn but this was a sexy story! Please write more!

Like all your stories, very hot and very well written. A major turn-on. I don't know what you're studying in college, but you should consider a writing career.

So well written, I felt as if you were doing those things to me. Mmmmmmmmm.

God that was hot. I loved how hot making out with her was.

I loved reading your story will you continue with this story?

Pat

fantastic story. milene is my favourite lesbian writer. really I love milene.

sweetbny

wonderfully arousing stories. In my mind, I imagine that you have done all these things. Whether from memory or imagination, I thank you for sharing your verrrry good writing.

Ok, I've had it with all these dudes praising your work, Milene. It's time to hear what a real dyke has to say. (Meaning me, of course.)

So, I think your writing is freaking brilliant! Your dialogue is authentic, characters all well defined, well developed plots & the sex is beautifully descriptive & absolutely awesome. My only complaint is that they're too short & I've been binge reading your submissions & will be devastated when I've read them all. The only solutions are for me to read each story again, & for you to post more. Take your time, I'm not pushing or demanding really. I'm just on my knees, with juices dropping from my pussy, trickling down my thighs & drip dip drippng on the sheets as I humbly beg you, "Thank you, Milene,, may i have another?"

One of premier authors on Literotica! Sensual and erotic story. Your description skill unmatched Easy 5 stars. As a fellow author, I am humbled.

Hot and sweet.

KumquatMay

Real Dyke? What is that?