All Comments on 'Mama Stops the Hurt'

The story was good and sexy. However, the narrator style in which it was written was very distracting. It felt like there was a third person in the room describing the sex to the son blow by blow (no pun intended). It definitely took something away from the story for me.

As the last comment pointed out, it's hard to pull off a first-person, present-tense story. You didn't quite manage it. They typically end up feeling like you're reading the "closed caption" version of a phone-sex conversation. "I'm touching your dick. Your dick is huge. You put your dick in me. It's filling me up." Blah-blah-blah.

Love the dirty dialogue. "I'm going to come inside you, Mama." "I sure as hell hope so!" She says. "I wouldn't want it any other way, Press." This couple knows what that wonderful hairy hole between a mother's legs is for. It's where her baby boy blows his balls. Ah, motherly love--can't beat it.

Story may not be perfect but was good reading, did the son just create a grand baby for his mother, finish the story with a swelling belly to go with the huge cock !!!

How do miss things like that when posting?

A very fair amount of Literotica readers have been exactly where the narrator was in terms of legal situation. The setup was impeccable. The action was heated and I sympathized with characters. There were things that hit a false note , but overall I have to thank the author for another Imaginative and genre tweaking job.

Don't listen to those other knuckleheads who criticize your story and our style. It was great!

Oh Mama, you fuck so much better than Beth! I'm going to put your legs up on my chest so I can get deeper than anyone has ever been. You're going to feel like a virgin again tomorrow, even though you've fucked hundreds of cocks. Oh Mama, your pussy feels so good, it fits around my big cock so perfectly. I'm going to fuck you every chance I get now.

Regardless of some complaints, this was a great short story. Let those who complain do better. Your stories always satisfy.

Warren

Much fun to read! Thank you!

I don't believe many of us get on the momma/son incest sites in order to compete with Shakespeare in the hierarchy of classic literature. As a matter of fact who are these misguided fools who enter this site expecting to find literary masterpieces for their scholary enjoyment? The story line was good and the ease of reading was just as good. The heat was top of the heap.

I regret that I gave the writer only a 4 and not a 5. Don't know why I did that. Guess I just wanted to seem scholary by being a bit of a critic.

After all the stories you've written, you still don't understand the difference between your and you're?

Terrible story. Random spelling mistakes and repetitive language. 4/10

Was that bandjos I heard playing in the background? Good story but the hillbilly dialog seemed a little too thick. Mom is a self confessed slut as she has fucked and sucked her way to the top at her job. So much for self respect, which makes fucking her son was just another notch in her head board, so to speak. Probably to get tested for STD when he gets home. But at least she is a good mother and willing to comfort her hurting son. Got to give it four stars for that.