All Comments on 'Man of the House'

Story is longer than most but the sex scenes actually are fairly short. I love all the cum eating going on!

I have just read another recent incest story on this site,if I could get my time back I would ,no such problem with this very good submission .well done

Excellent read...love the descriptive writing. Very hot indeed!

This was a great start of what could be an excellent series. don't wait. Keep it going. Great scenes, loved the combinations. A little anal would have made it superb. That's only thing negative I could say.

Wow this has to be one of the best stories I have ever read on this site. That had so many hot elements in it. I was going nuts just reading it. I so hope there is a sequel to this. It would be a crime if another sequels was not made. Great job!!!!

What a lucky swine,excellent story,cant see how you can add to this

Excellent writer. Knowing how to draw out the descriptions to arouse the reader without prolonging the agony is a special talent demonstrated by the author.

I am looking forward to future stories.

Some amount of cunt shaving and dirty talk would have made the story more exciting.

The mom should be very dirty.

Good reading, I will look forward to more of the same time. I really liked the plot and the outcum

I read your story and found so many mistakes that it was distracting me so I had to reedit your story and correct the spelling before I could enjoy it. If you would like a corrected copy let me know. By the way to know past tense is spelled knew not new. Your editor must not speak English as a primary language.

Good stuff, you might think about adding another person into the story and making it longer with more details, at least I would like to read that.

The story was great but it is just stupid to end it that way you have to have julie fucked by Dave or strap-on fucked by Anne

four pages and we get a half assed end if you can't properly finish it don't start. the editing sucked as well either finish it yourself or find someone that will half a story is worse than no story at all.

I'm not a fan of lesbianism or threesomes, but given the description I guess I should have expected the latter. Overall, a good job.

marvelous, especially pages 3 and 4.

Absolutely love mom/son/daughter threeway stories! This one was great!! Wish it had been expanded into a series.

One of the best Three Way Incest stories I have ever read. Great job man. You deserved the five stars for this one

every time he ejaculates (but one) it is in the mouth of his partner.

sorry, but that seems a bit odd.

Everytime he wanted to come-out of the pussy and into to mouth. What's up with that?

Rarely does a story that contains kudos for an editor actually hold up under close scrutiny. I am happy to report that in this case the praise was totally justified. Reading the comments about swallowing cum, I then looked at the author's name. What is so odd about LANCER69 featuring oral orgasms. It's 69 for God's sake!!!! D U H!!!!

Why didn't he dump his spunk in their cunts where it suppose to go it always went in their mouth, not bad it you want a blow job. Plus the ending for me was pretty poor. 3 stars.

This is one of the best stories I’ve read in this section. I loved it. Just one thing, to answer some questions by commentors. He was coming in her mouth because she specifically asked him to. She said that she wanted that way every time. Jeez, it was in the story, I guess some people must have skipped over that part. I would like to see more of this story, I do hope that there’s a sequel. I would give this story five stars, because it was HOT!!

This is why I read the comments first. I'll pass...

Excellent!

I agree with Kookaburra8

Not bad but

Why didn't he dump his spunk in their cunts where it suppose to go it always went in their mouth, not bad it you want a blow job. Plus the ending for me was pretty poor.

Also not into girl on girl

Great story but for the fact that he had to cum in their mouths. Maybe great for the women but it doesn't beat the feeling of cuming while buried to the hilt in a pussy and trying to push further as climax. I guess it's one form of birth control, just not the most fun way. Three stars for the rest of the story.