by Syzoth
I LOVED the opening half of this story! It was so endearing to read how Sy and Amanda struggled to maintain the excitement in their marriage after having a baby. This seems like a real life strugge when it comes to parenthood, and I felt like he's speaking from the heart. The love Sy feels for his wife and family is so palpable!
From an objective standpoint, the quality of the writing has VASTLY improved from Chapter 1. It's like night and day.
You've constructed an amazing world around a wonderful love story, Sy!
XOXO
Just joined Lit and this is the first story I came across. Dam. I hope they're all this good. You have a vivid imagination and a way with words, my friend. Will definitely check out your earlier works.
I've read both "Mandy's Sexcapade" stories and all 13 chapters of "Sharing My Wife Amanda". I love Mandy! What a sexy wife. But I hope she's not getting replaced by the "new hot thing", because I feel that's where things are going. Please say it ain't so. But I would bang the hot babysitter, too!
Hot little tale (tail?) I like how you've incorporated the Mandy-Piper relationship into the story. Your writing skills seemed to have made a great leap forward, too.
Thanks, Sunshine! You know as well as anyone that my stories are near and dear to me, and directly from the heart. I love my wife more than life itself.
You're still superhot, though!
Thanks, RumpJumper.
There are some great stories on Lit, and I hope this is first of many that you enjoy. And I hope you do check out my earlier works. The "Sharing My Wife" series sets the table for everything I post on here.
Thanks again!
Bigdeal69,
You better take a number, dude. Hahaha!
Thanks for your continued support. And don't worry, Mandy will always be my central character. I AM contemplating giving Piper her own series since I've gotten a lot of wonderful messages about her, but we'll see.
Everyone does seem to be in love with my wife, though. Hahaha!
Thank you, TR!
I wanted to throw a curveball to keep things fresh. I realize the "hot babysitter" fantasy is a cliche, but it still works for me! Haha! And, if you read closely, this story really is about Amanda.
Thanks for your comments about my writing skills. As with all things in life, I'm just trying to get better at it.
-Sy
What is it about older married men always chasing much younger women?
What a fucking sucking wonderful situation. I would love to join a family like this, And able to fuck and suck these two beauty’s one at a time and or both together, so totally debauched and depraved, multi fucking on a grand scale. Cunt lapping sex maniac uk.
KAT,
I'm a HAPPILY married man, but I'm not goingto lie: if a pretty young woman walks past me, I'm going to look. What can I say?
So much has been said, written and tons of video exist on that very subject.
A pretty hot young thing gets hired and the daddy gets the envy for her. Always, always a hot topic.
Well done Sy.
Such a great read, as always. I love the continued development of these two, and I definitely loved Piper! Saw in a previous comment that you were considering a spin off with her as the central character. That would be perfect!
You’ve been creating this beautiful, ever-deepening and dynamic world with these stories, and I will be checking back for more!
Thanks, VH!
I've been waiting for your next story, too!
Thank you so much for your feedback!
I'm trying really, really hard to flesh out my characters and build a world where all of my storylines intersect. Thank you for noticing!
Piper, will in fact, be getting her own series soon. I'm actually in the process of trying to rename this story to "The Hot Babysitter Chapter 1".
Thanks again!
As I went through all your chapters again today I have to say you have written some the best and hottest stories I've seen on this site. I'm glad you are giving Piper her own series, but I would like to make a suggestion. Maybe she should be your "Jimmy"? Amanda always being your number one but Piper giving you something Amanda can't?
No lie: I was so hot after reading this that I banged my wife, and it was the best sex we had in a long time. Thanks for the inspiration!
Awesome story
I'll keep reading!