All Comments on 'Manhattan Madness'

This was a great story! It is a little long but it was great!

Chile, it's great to see you back! This is one of my all-time favorite stories. Great build-up and climax. Any chance we'll see the rest of "Heaven Sent" sometime?

Great to see you writing again mate, great story ... stay with us eh :)

You covered every major fetish out there -- and you did it well. One damn hot story.

I really enjoyed this story and I especially like the way you made it into a whole drown out thing. That made me want to keep reading it. I hope you put out something else real soon. Keep up the good work!

the next chapter should include Jim returning to New York to find two nice holes waiting for him

I thought the story was really hot but then the whole she-male crap really made it go south. Why do writers screw up like that. Warn us that there's fag content here. You know the majority of the guys who are going to read this are hetero. Right? Right?

A truly awesome story. Enjoyed it very very much. As good as your other story, Sordid Conception.

Oh... my... fucking... GAWD!!! That has to have been one of the hottest, most erotic, visually descriptive, well thought out stories I have ever read on Literotica (an I have been reading stories here for more than 5 years!). The intricate and complicated plot, the erotically descriptive detail, everything was pure pleasure to sit back and read (and I'll admit, stroke myself).

Great storytelling! All I can say is thank you.

i had to jump to the end from the second page. :(

Took me two hours to read and i'm a fast reader. Loved it although it was written when I was five.

Way too long.

Quit when I saw 13 pages

Best I've read on here yet. And I've been reading for a while.

Awesome story. Was skeptical about reading it when I saw the length, but was well worth it. Best I've read here and most realistic: the characters are believable. Only criticism: julie's secret was quite a turn off, but it redeemed itself at the end. Very progressive for '95. Was still a kid then. Wow

First time reading a sex story involving a tranny! Very strange yet pretty hot!

Wonderful story. I couldn't put it down or keep my hands to myself while reading much to the enjoyment of those around me. The tranny was a very nice very enjoyable surprise.

Good story unfortunately for me the ending was disappointing. 4 stars

Overall a good story.

I SURE AS HELL Wish I could have this happen to me.. I live in manhattan, if only... great read, and well told. Thank you.

good story, too bad Julie and Jim didn't take each others asshole, that would have been really excepting Julie completely..

Amazing story. Very well written. I have to say, though, I was hoping that Jim would have leaned over his sister and kissed Julie while they were both inside her. Having that be the moment Beth came would have been amazing!