by ariel58
Lovely chapter. As someone said, "Love conquers all"
The only thing I regret is that this story seems to have reached the final chapter.
5 * for you.
I apologize for my English (yet and forever), isn't my native language.
I feel as if you should revisit the family at some point and hope you will.
Thank you for a wonderful story!
If this is the end, well, it was a great ride. The Portugal holiday, with or without naturalism, would have been nice to experience, with a future Chloe (age 18) at a naturalist holiday throwing up an interesting subject to handle well. And I would still like to see Kim and Chloe develop a relationship in the future, perhaps musically as well as romantically.
Many thanks for all your kind comments and encouragement- it means a lot to me. The good news is that there is still one more concluding chapter to come, and hopefully that will answer at least some of the outstanding questions!
...is there such a thing as an appetizing one?
Loved the whole story. And, as someone who has spent years in a wheelchair, I appreciated the way you handled Chloe's character.
-Rei
I wish this was not the end of this...lot more potential here!
Will try again later. Looking forward to your final chapter!