All Comments on 'Marie Ch. 05'

keep it up wouldd love to see more pics of wife

The incredible, teasing eroticism of your tale continues!

Every chapter leaves me lusting for the next. I've tried to analyze your story, but my erection is way too distracting for that.

I'm looking forward to Marie's shameless performance before a large audience. Hoping to see her well-fucked by the male and female cast.

As suggested by another commenter, would love to see pics of Marie illustrating the story.

I appreciate and enjoy the measured increases in sexual activity, subtle nc/reluctant tones and voyeurism. Words cannot describe how much I was hoping that Craig would seize the moment and take both ladies for his selfish pleasure! Reading this series is like watching a beautiful wife being cajoled by her husband into slowly removing her clothing and artfully displaying her entire naked form while dancing seductively in perfect step with an erotic song. And of course she is doing all of this before a group of leering strangers waiting to devour (individually and collectively) her in order to sate their sexual hungers.

I agree with wath the last guy said! This is lik watching a dance of seduction. The Marie is seduced by the lure of the sexuality of the performance. Ed is seduced by the ludeness of his own fantasy of see his wife exposed sexually in the play. We the readers are seduced by the voyurisum of it all as the story unfolds before us. Pleas edon'r keep us waiting so long for the next chapter.

Don't you dare stop! I want to hurt with passion for at least 5 more chapters! Thanks for the incredible series so far and thanks in advance for the rest to come!

Good story for your first time writing erotica. Like some of the other reviewers, I would like to see each chapter posted a bit closer together rather than having to wait several weeks between chapters. I've read many of the stories on Literotica and this one definitely is original!

OMFG! what a story, hope you can imagine the state of arousal I was in after reading. I just hope you enjoyed my stories as much as I do yours. HAPPY NEW YEAR! and all best in 2010. JuLee

Oh, ball boiling hot. Makes me want to do community theater!