All Comments on 'Marlo'

I loved the story. I sure hope more chapters are coming.

Liked the story. Liked the characters and their interaction. Would like for you to continue this story as I think it could go more chapters. They have a lot to explore. Thanks for your time and imagination.

Very well written, I thought you did a great job with this story. I will be interested to see what happens next.

when Nick eats his sister's pussy. Mom and Dad will undoubtedly notice a change in their children's relationship after they return home.

Unique story line--we usually don't find stories about blind people regarding sex. Not that they don't have sex--they've just been ignored.

I think the brother is called both Ben and Nick in this piece. At least once, Marlo is Margo. There are a flurry of other typos or errors as well. The plot is good enough, but proofread!

Thanks, folks, for your kind comments and encouragement. Since this is my first story in almost three years, I'm glad I decided to submit it. Apologies for the typos. I'll try to do better next time. There's a sequel that's part way written, but given my heavy work schedule in the real world I'm not sure when it might be finished.

You have created an adorable sister fuck baby! OMG! I will be VERY disappointed if you do not continue this story. I need to read about their first fuck! Wish I had an adorable buck toothed but beautiful blind sistah! I'd make her feel right! Feel Gooooood! Keep up the good work!

Great story and well written. Fuck the critics, that think they are an English professor. These stories are jack-off material people, Not a submission for English Lit 101.

Can't wait for more.

Sexy writing, great insights into their relationship, very clear-eyed view of women's response to BJs (sorry can't think of a better phrase).

More please! I'd like more on Lo's sensory awareness, eg. she could hear every detail of him in her bedroom.

Welcome back!

Great story, please give us more!

Looking forward to the next two (at least) chapters...

Really enjoyed your story. Now we need to know what happens next. Waiting

for Chapter 2

Enjoying it.

One little thing yhough, they are brother and sister not step anything. Adoption is full family inclusion. May not have common birth parents but are legally full siblings.

Step siblings mean they have no common blood but a parent of one married a parent of the other.

A great story. Hoping for additional chapters.

Got me all wet. That was good! Liked the forbidden love.

Great fucking story. I've gotta go take care of something between very hard my legs now...