All Comments on 'Marriage Trouble Ch. 01'

I though it was pretty good for a first ch. but I still think she was wrong to tell her wife she was forced into marriage, it does take 2 willing people, I think she just said that to get her wife to agree to a 3-some, but I do think Savannah was wrong to suggest that right then, she should have waited until later on, but still a good start

I thought that it was a wild ride but agree to never say you were pushed into marriage

I think we've read enough loving wife stories to know where this is going.

Kat is an awesome Girl but she is really very dumb and superficial. She worship her Wife coz she is a Trophy Blonde. She sucks her ass and swallows and lets herself be treated like crap just so she can say she is together with a trophy Blonde. She is pathetic like a White Man. She is an idiot and deserves to suffer and be exploited till she finally wakes up and switches on her brains. Why are you stupid Whites so brainwashed to worship these Blondes like a real Goddess? Oh she won the genetic lottery, oh she is a top notch, oh she got the ass of a 10 yeah old boy and a shaved Pussy like a baby'. So stupid, so sad. Dayam! Deez White Crakaz do be on sum stupid-dumb shit. Real shit for real. Man, Peckerwoods...

Why do black men gravitate towards the white women? Especially black athletes when there are perfectly good sistas out there for them to choose from. And why do white girls go for black men? Is it the size of their dick? Either way, the concept of a black dick is gross to me.

I wanted to reach through the screen and shake Kat out of her trance. While opening up a relationship sexually is amazing, maybe there's another part to this story where we see Kat realizing her self worth and moving on?

But I really hope Kat is finally gonna realize that she deserves so much more than uncaring, selfish Savannah.

Well crafted story but with sexual bullying, it happens but there is likely to be a sad ending.

I can see myself in kat's shoes its nice how you make us live in the moment.

Cant wait for the other chapter gosh i might send my email for it

Kat deserves much MUCH better...even if Savannah was Miss World or something...

Geez man! Poor Kate. She definitely doesn't deserve to be treated this way. Not even if her wife is the most wonderful woman in the world.

YKN4949, I love your writing. You capture all sorts of passion along with all kinds of internal struggle. You write so well, and are such a great storyteller. I hope you don't mind me giving your girls this advice, but I think they could really benefit.

My dear Kat. You are right on the verge of a wonderful discovery. Your devotion to your wife is sublime, and your commitment to her happiness is strong. You've been able to use that devotion and commitment to push beyond your own expectations. Unfortunately, that devotion and commitment to Savannah and your own unexplored limits keeps you from enjoying the pleasure your body was feeling as you engaged in behaviors you didn't think you could like. You would do well focusing on the sensations of the harness rubbing your clit, and using that action to get yourself off, too. It would be wonderful for you to chase that building tension as you ride that strap-on in your ass. Focus on that, and you'll both cum gloriously. Your wife is doing that readily because she has already explored those pleasures, and she wants to share those pleasures with you. But, she isn't a teacher or a therapist. All she can to is beg (cajole, guilt) you to try enjoyable things. Focus a bit more (maybe not exclusively) on your pleasure as you try things she finds pleasurable.

Now, Savannah, you dear, adventurous vixen. Your Kat is a sentimental one, and she will follow you into any adventure, if somewhat reluctantly. Gentle affection, and compliments from you go straight to that woman's heart, and overflow it. Give her some of that while you're pounding her with that strap-on, and she'll ride you into the sunset. And while you're at it, urge her to tell you what she feels. Help guide her around the roadblocks she's set up in her thinking by helping her focus on what feels good.

Good luck, to the 3 of you.

I like the story. It's written well, but made me angry.

Kat loves Savannah so much, but why? Savannah doesn't seem to have any redeeming qualities. Frankly, she's a selfish bitch.

Well written, i do not like Savannah

Kat needs a new relationship. I hate Savannah already.

Oh man this story makes me sad honestly. It's quite hot and an interesting kind of reluctance. It's pretty hot that she was willing to do all that stuff from her wife.