All Comments on 'Married for Money?'

A great body AND money? Where do I sign up?

5 stars

I guess they’re both rich? I can’t tell from the story and it doesn’t make me read it again. You’ve done better.

R.

Britease still got that there touch with his shorts.

Thanks for the read.

... or coming from

Enjoyed it very much.

Good ending!

5

Always a chuckle. Thanks

As enjoyable as I have come to expect from you.

Fishing stories, their all the same no matter what you hook or the bait! Thanks for the story!

This makes no sense! SHE has millions? I thought she supposedly might have married him for HIS money? And her lying about his sexual abilities, then the whispering; does she have a lover?

That's a sweet little moment in time. We read so many stories where the husband overheard his wife's brag about adultery. This was a delightful change of pace. Thank you.

Just words, no real value. No place to go with this.

Good read. It's great to see you back.

Nearly Perfect!!!!

5***** Short nice story with original twists...both it turned out are rich. The way June talked about her husband, I thought she talking about me!!!!

Love that twist! Never expected it!

One way to get big bang for the buck (see? innuendo and 'murican lingo all in one... and don't forget gratuitous alliteration) is to utilize cliche' well = good job.

And watching the commentators scrabble for some kind of, any kind of, adultery/disrespect? Bonus!

Green-something

Thanks for the effort.

And @SBrooks... Jesus Christ, enjoy a damn cute story, without wanting a cheater in there. The other women thought she was 30, when obviously she was older, so she doesn't disclose her age. And she insinuated her husband can go at it 3 or 4 times a night to tell "her fish story", and pump up her man.

Although it's obvious that Helen is cheating though.

going nowhere. 750 words no story.

Neatly done, Mr B

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The current competition seems to be how far away from the Loving Wives definition we can write a story and still get it posted in the LW category.

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Lue

Funny, short and interesting.

I don’t think I get it. I think

No score, as that would be unfair.

Great short. 5*****

Really liked it. 5*

Entertaining.

Well done.

@johnadp, it's not about WANTING a cheater in there, it's about wanting a STORY! If you can please explain the plot to me, I'd be happy to read it.

Cute, but I’m also not sure what it’s about. I suppose neither married their spouse for their money. Three stars ⭐️ for trying,

A fun slice

A fun slice of life from a few people having a good time.

Not every slice of life has a plot.

Thank you Britease.

A sweet and short loving story

Damn

I'm sorry, this one didn't make it for me. It doesn't matter whether it's in Loving Wives or Non'Erotic, it just wasn't cool. I'd bet the other wives cheat.

Ha

I liked that one. Not all LW stories need to be about cheating.

Good story- well written- liked the plot

Nice story! I love well written short 750 word stories!

Nice. ⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐

Sneaky 😏