All Comments on 'Martha in America Ch. 10'

the sister shit has got old, did you forget her name ?

his sister his sister his sister

or are you just doing it to add to your word count?

Though the complaint about 'his sister' could be made less crudely or more eloquently, I must agree that giving sister a name would make for easier reading and a nicer story. The frequent sibling reference seems out-of-place, when most friends in normal conversation would share the names of their siblings. I still enjoy the story, but the suggestion would improve it.

Tried to Send Feedback, but it seems blocked. I wished to send a ticklish suggestion discreetly rather than in public comments. leBonhomme, would you allow Feedback?

Psst! But tell anyone; don't want people to think every Becky they meet could be my sister - so charmingly incestuous and bi sister.

At the end of chapter 11, she introduces herself.