by endthedream
I didn't get this story. Maybe it's me but it seamed to be nothing but a bunch of random thoughts put together.
You are a very stupid boy,its whats in the bed you need to consider not whats under it.You been drinking or something ,the only time I saw martians under the bed I was pissed,25 for the entertainment.
What a startling revelation,I wondered what was under my bed,perhaps as well as a commode I have martians that would explain why my cat and dog will not come anywhere near .Must go now and have a look.
And cleverly done, though perhaps another edit pass wouldn't have been amiss. Ignore the people who don't get it. You aren't writing for them anyhow.
<p>"A boy's will is the wind's will, and the thoughts of youth are long, long thoughts." --Longfellow