All Comments on 'Martians Under My Bed'

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I-WISHI-WISHover 16 years ago
What Is This

I didn't get this story. Maybe it's me but it seamed to be nothing but a bunch of random thoughts put together.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
STUPID BOY

You are a very stupid boy,its whats in the bed you need to consider not whats under it.You been drinking or something ,the only time I saw martians under the bed I was pissed,25 for the entertainment.

AnonymousAnonymousover 16 years ago
I HAD NO IDEA

What a startling revelation,I wondered what was under my bed,perhaps as well as a commode I have martians that would explain why my cat and dog will not come anywhere near .Must go now and have a look.

pope32767pope32767over 16 years ago
Excellent though of course not entirely perfect

And cleverly done, though perhaps another edit pass wouldn't have been amiss. Ignore the people who don't get it. You aren't writing for them anyhow.

<p>"A boy's will is the wind's will, and the thoughts of youth are long, long thoughts." --Longfellow

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