All Comments on 'Mary, Fred and the Gangster Ch. 02'

As an attorney and officer of the court, I was put off by the attorney's debate in Chpt. 1 about running for office v. letting a murderer get off scott free. I thoroughly enjoyed how you had the attorney tell the murderer in this chapter that, as an officer of the court, he was going to make sure that the gangster would get his--no matter what. Well done! Our oath is a sacred one, and I was glad to see your main character abiding by it. Full marks from me! -- WhiteKnightAR

The 40% of the damned thing is written and obscured by the blue literotica promotional border. Author, don't you ever review your work's presentation before submiting it?

I'm always a fan, but this one was even better than normal. It's nice to see your other loving wives stories that aren't all the becoming of ones.

Hey Anonymous in Ohio, Look at your 'view' settings for TEXT SIZE and choose medium. A larger size will cause the text to overlap the border. In Mozilla choose DECREASE CNTRL until the text no longer invades the blue border.

JPB, thanks for writing beyond your normal parameters. I cannot understand Fred's acceptance, but that is why we read these stories! Seeing another person's view is sometimes worthhile.

Hopefully the gangster will get his just deserts at some point, either from the justice system or his prisonmates.

and if the partner is a wimpy cuck with ambitions. Who knows, TK U MLJ LV NV

Just a load of garbage