All Comments on 'Masks'

I love costum parties, and this is one I'd love to be at. Can you say ;"OH Daddy"

The trouble with masks is that they eventually have to come off. Can't wait for the next part. Great story.

outstanding!!! one of the BEST i've ever read!!!

i love these costume/mistaken identity stories, and this one was great. i was hoping that dad was going to find out mid fuck that it was his daughter, but continue to fill her with his cum anyhow, but i certainly wasn't disappointed. well done!

Dad makes an excuse for them leaving the party before unmasking, just before they walk in their own front door he pushes her up against the door and lays another french kiss on her and whispers in her ear, "your mom can never know about tonight, it will be our little secret. I knew it was you the minute you got to the party". Now you take it from here POV.

With a very nice twist. I hope to read chapter 2 soon.

What a great story, had some great details of how they were dressed, how she had to shave her pussy so the costume would look right on her, and the party it's self.

Loved the sex scene between her and her father.

Sorry I only gave you four stars, that was only because you didn't finish the story if you had I would had given you six stars.

Terrific story, great ending. In my imagination, Dad, in his drunken mind has to realize that it's his daughter but is so much into the sex that he doesn't care, much like his daughter doesn't, and pretends that he thinks it's his wife. Undoubtedly leads to more sex eventually.

Excellent writing, very erotic.

I agree with the suggestion about the mask coming off during the act! That would have been totally hot. But the father continues in spite of the discovery and spurs him on to greater lust. The other suggestion about going home and continuing their affair, with the father saying that he knew all along is incredibly erotic too! She is conflicted, of course, but can't seem to get enough of him. KEEP WRITING!

I really liked this story. It was super hot! It reached a level of sexiness that is often only achieved by longer stories with more character development. The fact that you managed this is in only two pages is impressive. Please keep writing. Five stars.

What was he in the rest of the suit?

Sorry but you have been very sloppy in your writing.

Get a proof-reader and an Editor.

I loved it. Don't worry about the nay Sayers. I understood the story without need of editing. After all it's the story that I am here for. We are not English teachers here to grade a paper.

I also would have loved to have gone on to midnight. See what happens afterwards.

Maybe a sequel?

can't wait for the second part, can she get away with it, will her mother end up kicked out and her father have a new wife ?, did she remember to take her birth control the day of the party ? please keep going :-)

Blah blah minor editing. POV, blah blah. Great intro and setup. A good 'voice' of the daughter. Smooth, funny, and a great 1st chapter. Keep up the good work!

You anonymous fucking haters need to sign up and try to write something yourself. It takes a lot to get it from your mind to the site. Sometimes your brain works faster then your hands. Don't hate if you don't want to put a name behind it. I thought the story was great. I look forward to reading more!

Please continue writing about this story. I LOVED IT.

Part two , three maybe four coming soon I hope?

All that needs to be said. Wow.

What happens next

please please finish this :-)

Please write more!!!!!

SEQUEL. NOW! PLEASE!

Brilliant! Amazing! I'm soaking wet right now. This story was sexy.

I would love it if you continued the story! :)

Good job!

-L.M.

One of the HOTTEST stories I've read!!!!!!! Loved it!!! Keep it going!!!!

great so far can not wait for the rest

This one could use a sequal...

This story ABSOLUTELY needs a sequel.

if this author is not coming back to finish the good story does anyone else want a go ?

It made me sweat, I think she should take her mask off and surprise her father

Is this EVER going to be finished? Would be a shame to leave it as is...

I also think this story requires a sequel.

Great... Would love to see how she tries to cover this up.

Would she run home undress her mother.. would her mother be shaved also.

The whole story. I really want to know what happens next. Do they find out? Does it change all of their relationships? Please write more.

That was really well written, was it true? It evokes some stimulating thoughts about the fact that one could get away with something like that quite easily.

the writer has not been writing on here for almost a year, I would suggest someone else posts a sequel on here instead , who agrees with me ?

Why do they always start a good story and leave all hanging?

This is so good, please continue

Oh man, this was right on precipice of being perfect! Everything was great! Except for that last line.. What you did was like telling an epic story of a hero's quest to slay a dragon, and doing it perfectly. Then the moment the hero slays it, you say "and then they lived happily ever after, the end". Everything besides the conclusion was a 10/10, and the conclusion itself a 1/10. I know you haven't written in a while, but please keep it up! You're very good at it, just make sure to flesh out those endings!

You must write more

.. start. Shame you never finished it.

This was a great story, very vivid and well written, but I wonder...what does happen at midnight?

good story but you used the word "ravenously" twice in one sentence...just mentioning

Love this story it is my favorite.

Please write a part 2. This story is amazing and I would love to know how it ends.

...I must admit I had become a bit of an animal for a while there, jumping him at every opportunity. He became stressed at having to perform so often and ran off to find someone with a normal sexual appetite. Since then I just hadn't found anyone else.

@@@ I knew I should have settled down with a nice, quiet nymphomaniac! @@@

What? No part two?? Dammit! I really thought she would scream out 'Daddy!' During her second one or slip and say something afterwards, heh. You do wonder though if good ole dad knows perfectly well he just screwed his tight lil' girl silly and is just playing along! I cant imagine something didnt tip him off, drunk or not :). Hell, if I were him Id play along, at least till later when I thanked my daughter for being such a good girl ;) (and asking for repeats!;)

This was a good story, remarkably correct technically, unlike many others in this genre. It was sexy, real enough to be plausible and horny as hell, a clever take on the theme of mistaken identity. A good effort!

CONFIDENCE to walk about looking sexy and CONFIDENT

...I must admit I had become a bit of an animal for a while there, jumping him at every opportunity. He became stressed at having to perform so often and ran off to find someone with a normal sexual appetite. Since then I just hadn't found anyone else.

I'm sorry but this part made me laugh so much. I would love more but I don't know how you could really continue the story line without losing aspects that made this story so successful and plausible. Well done.

WISH MY STEP DAD WILL FUCK ME LIKE THAT

Mmm yeah ... made me cream as well as her father. Wish this could happen to me. Great story.

Loved it. Got very wet and turned on reading this. What happens next? Please write more.

This was a pretty good little story. And you're pretty good writer who makes few mistakes. Why did you stop writing? This site needs more writers like you.

The old fart.

Yeah. What happens next?

6 years ago I stumbled upon this site by accident and this became the first erotic story that I ever read. Needless to say I was absolutely hooked and now all that I really want is for ParagonOfVirtue to come back for just one last finale and finish this story.

what a hot story but is there a part 3

Love this.

Perhaps Mom HAD called and said she could not be there. So when the daughter showed up dad knew it was her from the beginning and teased her all night before ravishing his beautiful daughter.

Yeah I think he knew,and he fucked her anyway Great story!!! More!

This is by far one of the best incest stories here and particularity unintended sex stories. The situation is plausible, nothing is needlessly requiring extreme suspension of disbelief, no over the top stupid stuff and no sudden spontaneous sex out of nowhere without preamble.

This definitely needs completing, though.

This is one of the best stories I have read. I would really like to know what happens at midnight..

yes id like to know what happened at midnight

Incredible hot. I would hope for a follow up but it looks like the author hasn't been active since 2012. 5/5

that was super hot but I guess there is no follow up?

So HOT.