All Comments on 'Mason Ch. 09'

I swear I look for your stories you have left and I'm like a junkie. I find myself not reading much others or trying to find other writers of your vison. Well as always my snoopy dance has done me well. I agree no need to tell Toni, Mason purchased the ajoining Condo cause this early in the game would come off "A Little Creepy"(said in my Austin Powers Dr.Evil voice)...lmao

So glad that the ever so quiet but, when he says something it's because its well worth it BEN has given the wonderful Mason the O.K..aka Approval. As always I can't wait for ch. 10 and the rest of your other delites to come out.... Thanks, your faithful junkie reader

What will happen when she finds out he's an ancient? Oooooh!

I agree wholeheartedly with Kelleigh0217. I go to your submission page after reading any updates to make sure that none has slipped pass me.

Please update Mason as soon as possible. This story is hitting me similar to

"Ethan" when the couple's emotion to mate are beginning to align so that they

can truly become "mates" and start their future - together

Thanks for such great stories. It is such a great delight that you are doing several stories at the same time. You are truly a great talent!!!

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It's nice to see the pendulum start to swing the other way---toward hope and away from sorrow. Also good to witness how assertively Toni stood up to the unprofessional nurse, Kim. The whole loss and grieving experience didn't cost Toni her backbone.

I see trouble ahead, though, when Toni discovers that Mason "condo-stalked" her. Seems like a misstep to me. Toni's a character who likes to be in control.

Like another commenter, I wonder how Toni is going to react to discovering a vampire in her world. I hope she can come to appreciate Mason for all that he is.

The story is just as addicting as soap operas used to be...so we wait anxiously for the next chapter!

Another 5 stars! Like some others commenting, I'm wondering about Toni's reaction to him purchasing the condo next to hers. As he understands himself to be her mate, the action is less disturbing to him, but for a human female it may seem a bit much... though she is 'feeling' him as a mate would even if she doesn't know it yet. Which leads to the other thing, and that is that she still doesn't know that he is a vampire, something I almost forgot as well. Her character is written as a fairly calm individual. It is going to be very interesting to see how she reacts to that bit of news. ;o)

You have fed my addiction and it was good.

This is one great addiction you've written! I'm now wondering about Toni's reaction to Mason's condo being bought so close to hers. She'll definitely remember that there were four available when she purchased hers. Now Mason will move into his before her...she's going to be quite suspicious. Add to that that he's a vampire and things are about to get very interesting! Love it!

But I think that buying a condo next to hers is a little creepy.

and looking forward to them finally getting together as a couple with more children. Keep the updates coming as quickly as you have been doing.

Thanks for updating. From all the reviews I know this would be an intersting story to read once it is completed. Keep up the good work. Update and finish this story soon.

Now they're both free to move on and towards each other! But Mason should tell Toni about living next door!

I love everything about this story except I am confused over Kim's character. I thought she worked in Boston, not San Diego. She was the waitress that was trying to hook up with James during this drunk night. That was Boston. Now she is in San Diego???? Am I missing something?

You are good. I love this story and Mason, who I didn't really care for in the Ethan story, has won me over in this story. LOL, I love the twist and turns. I am just wondering why James. I had to admit I didn't mind him getting Toni but I really wish he did not have to die. Anyways, Wonderful story!!! Can't wit too see what will be...