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BlanckaertBlanckaertover 12 years ago

I hope this doesn't end here.... but it read well wrapped ;)

Though the tanker accident did strike a cord with me... as I drive one ;)

Great story.....

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127over 12 years ago
Thank you for my Christmas Gift

I had some down time and was checking emails and figured I'd see what was out today. As I figured not much Damn it if I wasn't wrong and gladly so. Thank you so much for this all is just so beautiful but, I have to agree with the other reader. Please there still can be another chapter. I wonder if they'll have any children, What will happen when Jamie understands Mason is a Vampire. Please..... So Happy Holidays and Thank you Kalamazoo

katgoddess1katgoddess1over 12 years ago

Simply lovely. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
lovely story...

is this the end or do you have a final chapter?

*****

AhzureDragonAhzureDragonover 12 years ago
Wow

I absolutely loved this story, even if you end it here it was great. Although, I am a fan and would love for it to continue. :) I have read several of your stories and must say this one has taken first place as my favorite so far but I have enjoyed them all. You are a great writer and look forward to more.

Tastee323Tastee323over 12 years ago
Merry Christmas

Ahhhhh!!!! Another one of your awesome stories comes to an end. I wasn't sure if I was going to like this one but it came to be one of my favorites. Thanks for an awesome read!!! You always end one and leave us with the beginning of another, so let's see where Maurice takes us. I am anxious to see what happens to Hana too!!! As you have been told you're the

b-e-s-t-e-s-t!!!!! ;)

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Fantastic.

This was a great Christmas Present. Is this the last chapter? I hope not because it has so much more to do

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
AAAAAAAAHHHHH!

I'm legitimately doing a silent scream in my bedroom so I won't wake anyone. BEST CHRISTMAS PRESENT EVER! Huge fan of your writing. Wow, you're an inspirational writer. I love your stories. Okay, I'll quit raving, but this was just phenomenal! Epilogue, perhaps? =)

QuietmahoganystormQuietmahoganystormover 12 years ago
Fantastic!!

Thank you for finishing this story. This is one for the ages - so complex and just plain old good. Really consider getting published.

Excellent work - 5 stars

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Thank you for this great Christmas gift

This chapter was amazing. It was a great Xmas gift!!! I had looked forward very eagerly for this update. It definitely was worth the wait. As a tired Christmas hostess, I had to take time for me and read this chapter before bed.

I am torn as to liking this being the ending chapter with Toni and Mason, etc - going

off into the sunset to Hawaii and beyond. I really love these characters. This family has been so interesting that one more chapter about their life as vampire and mate does appeal to me, especially because of Toni's character and her evolving insights. I really love Jamie's and Mason's relationship, but I am curious about its effect on a daily basis and long term.

Again, thanks for this excellent story.

vt

kuroukiphoenyxkuroukiphoenyxover 12 years ago
tissue boxes!!

I got tissue boxws for anyone who needs em!

Such a beautiful gift...they both deserve love and this deserves a reward

Bravo!

NightpleasureNightpleasureover 12 years ago

As usual you did a terrific job with the chapter. I just really love your work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
What can I say? - NK

I Love this story, I have not finished but I am enjoying the story. Well written. Thanks for finishing it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
*****

An easy five stars - excellent chapter and story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
KALAMAZOO

Hi Kalamazoo is this the end of Mason, or do we get more chapters? I love all your series, you are a terrific writer. HAVE A BLESSED 2012!

MadameblaqueMadameblaqueover 12 years ago
Loved It

Reall beautiful ending. I really enjoyed this story and I look forward to reading more from you. Thank you for sharing your gift!!!

sylentpoetsylentpoetover 12 years ago
perfection

this was a lovely, romantic, and very touching story. I could read it over and over again.

donaldedonaldeover 12 years ago
another perfectly lovely story

You have to be one of the most talented writers on this site thank you for posting this lovely tale and am looking forward to reading more

Jujubee58Jujubee58over 12 years ago
Beatuiful Ending To A Wonderful Story!

Thank you for sharing this story! I'm glad Mason, Toni, and Jamie are finally together! Thank you James!

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOabout 12 years ago
Sweet

that she has found love when not looking for it, and Jamie has a dad that loves him as well. I am happy for all of them, sorry about James thou...

shortydeeshortydeealmost 12 years ago
Wonderful!!!!

Except for a few mistakes, it was a wonderful story. I like that you made each person had their own mistakes to live through and they needed time to live and TO LOVE.

mrskelleymrskelleyalmost 12 years ago
Love it!

Beautiful Ending!!!!!! Off to read more. Love this family!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
one of the best i've read

the first story i read of yours was "wolves".I loved this story except allie and five husbands was too much for me. Two or three yes but five too many. The second was "ethan" I loved that one too.The third was "Maurice" this one I loved even more because they acted like vampires even though I'm not really into vampire as much as I am into werewolves. The fourth was Nathan" I loved her angry at him and his doing what he could to win her over to him. The last one I read "mason" was different from the others in that it was more emotional. I cried so much with this one and laugh also. Thank you for writing these wonderful stories and giving me joy. Keep writing and you really should think about a editor and get these stories published even if you have to self publish. best wishes for great writing.

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
My favorite out of this series

Though I'm not into vampirism, but more into lycans/weres, I enjoyed Mason, including Eustace in this series. Both walked and talked the talk, which is refreshing. Mason, oh Mason.....sigh. I was so glad that he had another mate, and the love story between him and Toni was deeply touching. Toni truly loved both James and Mason deeply, and she in turned loved them both. I really enjoyed this series. I'm sure I left a comment before, but this story deserved a second read. Great writing author!

ScorpMoon

vickivalevickivaleover 11 years ago
Mason Mason Mason

I am glad that Mason found a mate that would love him in return. I appreciate that Katrina and Toni will be friends and than Ethan and Mason was able to resolve their differences. I started out not liking Mason because of the potential threat in the Ethan Series but he redeemed himself here. I love the story... Now to finish Patrick :)

AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago
Your Best Story

I absolutely enjoyed this series. Even when I first read Ethan, I already liked Mason better but I knew Mason wasn't gonna get with Katrina so I wanted to read this and I must say, I loved this better than Ethan. Even Toni has more of a personality than Katrina. I'm sooooo happy for Mason. And who doesn't love sweet little Jamie and Toni's parents. So many wonderful and memorable characters and a beautiful story. Oh and of course, James! =')

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 11 years ago
Oh No! Is it the end?

I need 1or 2 more chapters to tie evergthing up! Like the fact that James parsnts were not at the wedding, that she kept James last name, and if she did conceive since they never used protection! Please don't snd it yet. But, I forgot you always leave the snding open so that the next set of characters can tie it all up! Thank you Kalamazoo for being one of the best around with this writing thing! I wish I could give you mors than 5 Stars!

KittyOh48KittyOh48over 11 years ago
Oh No! Is it the end?

I need 1or 2 more chapters to tie evergthing up! Like the fact that James parsnts were not at the wedding, that she kept James last name, and if she did conceive since they never used protection! Please don't snd it yet. But, I forgot you always leave the snding open so that the next set of characters can tie it all up! Thank you Kalamazoo for being one of the best around with this writing thing! I wish I could give you mors than 5 Stars!

TiyeTiyeabout 11 years ago
Outstanding!

This is the third series of yours I've read, and by far my favorite. On to the next one.....

KesaKesaalmost 11 years ago

wow i really enjoyed this 1 i didn't think i would when i started reading BUT thanks for a great read !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

AMHJ89AMHJ89over 10 years ago
favorite

So far my favorite "book" in the series

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
This was so good

The fact that they love each other overrides that he an actual vampire. Is there's an epilogue?

Trinity71Trinity71almost 8 years ago
Wonderful story

One I will be re-reading on ocassion.

I would however have loved to read about their wedding night together....but anyway thanks for the wonderful journey of Toni & Mason.

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