All Comments on 'Massage Therapy Ch. 02'

We are treated to an excellent series like this,look forward to lesson three.

really enjoyed your well written story. Can't wait for #3

is just the best i have read in a while

when I started to read it I could not stop--all I can say is great great great---TY hope you write more of this story

Very intense and well written; I too will be looking for #3

Good pace, keep going for the FINALE!

Please don't wait to long for Chapter 3. The suspence is driving me crazy. Very well done. My first time wasn't as easy as sisters but I can still remember how exciting it was. Please keep it up.

I love all your stories and wish my brother was inside me like hers was. your stories make me cum so much. ask me anything about the things I do. I want to share.thank u kellypam18@aol.com

Very well written story, with just the right pace. Please continue with the 3rd part. I'm anxious to see how it plays out between the three of them...will any other family member their dad, uncle, aunt, cousins, friends, teachers get involved...beautiful story...

-Guy

more please but keep it just between the three of them also since kristen is obviously only 13-15 but due to the prudish web masters you need to make them over 18 you should look into other web sites that allow you to write about young lovers under 18it would make the story much better if you could put their real ages into the story it's to bad all erotic sites can't be more flexible the way some are

you took 2 chapters to go into descriptive erotic detail about the siblings discovering sex and then the mother approving. I don't know how you will continue the excellence with a third chapter. Too often when a writer adds more chapters they get into other things besides just good sex (anal, lesbian, gay, too much oral, while others may enjoy these, I don't. I know, that is just my opinion). It has also been mentioned about the age of the children, but the reader can translate the true age knowing that the author was restricted to depicting the characters 18 or older.

Simply horrendous. I grow tired of having these stereotypical characters portrayed the same way each and every story. Have some creativity!

Other than the fact that anyone who enjoys this garbage is in all likelihood just a sexually charged adolescent, I imagine that you must be very proud.

I hope AddToWater disregards the one low score left by an anonymous reviewer below, because all previous reviews gave this excellent story the highest possible rating. Many parents have perfectly honest discussions about sex with their children, a practice that should be encouraged. A mother like the one in this story is a rara avis indeed, but fantasizing about such an unrealistically cooperative parent is still sexually stimulating. I look forward to reading further chapters in this series.

I need more of it.

Can hardly wait for Chapter 3. GREAT JOB !

freakin awesome

this chapter just made my cock cum like crazy

i wish i had a hot sister i could do that with

awesome dude

sexxyboyluvspussc@yahoo.co.uk (kellypam mail me!)

This is truly a fantastic story. Well writen and very interesting. I am looking forward to read chapter 3 whenever you decide to post is. Nice work!! ^_^

i think you should continue it, there is certianly room for more!

Very nice.. Well writen.

great story! hopefully you're working on chapter 3.

it was pretty good it reminded me of when i was 20. this is pretty much exactly what happened to me and my sister

i need more

I am almost addicted to your way of writing.... I like it so much, so hot so sexy, so horny.. but never blunt or rough ...

very impressive......

Wow, great story. Too bad you stopped writing this story ( Massage therapy ). There was sooo much more that you could have added. So good while it lasted though. Maybe i'll add a few Chapters !!

Please continue to a chapter 3

That was really really incredible

wow, yes a Ch 3 is there for the making. Too bad you stopped writing. Very good stories.

Apparently, the author has started writing again after an extended hiatus - I am hoping that he will continue this excellent story for several more chapters.

... and this story is crying out for another chapter. :-)

UMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM!!!!!!!!!!!!

where is chapter 01?

Doesn't it seem odd that a two part series starts with Chapter 02?

Read the author's profile, it was taken down for some reason in the intervening years. He wrote that he was trying to get it modified so it would be visible again.

THIS WAS SMOKIN HOT!!!!!!!!

may i ask where chapter 01 is at?

absolutely loved this story and hope you write some more of it. This promises to be very hot.

Aces for this story. Looking for Chapter 3

So damn hot to read about such an encounter! Your writing skills are so consistent and add so much to these stories. It's great that brother and sister have their Mom's permission but more so that they are so caring about each other and respect their Mom for letting them and teaching them. Hopefully, after the morning after pill and putting Kristin on birth control; they will go at all the time but yet keep it from others so as to protect each other. Hopefully, Kristin will now want to explore all her ideas to start and get very skillful in pleasing herself and her brother. What does Mom have in store for herself I wonder ?? Thanks .....

This may be the most erotic chapter I have ever read on this site. It is the very definition of the word. Wow, just wonderful.

The mom should not have joined or touched them it was hot before she did that was messed up

I actually liked the idea of mom getting into the mix. The eroticism of that causing her own little orgasm is going to allow her to teach both kids from a 40 something's experience. Nothing has been said of mom's sex life while the kids were growing up, but I think that it is going to improve with her son's horse cock. She will have to show Kristen how to suck a cock, and Ricky the proper way to eat pussy. Is anal going to be part of the cirriculum? Ir Ricky going to be able to fill both his sister's and mother's ass with his slippery, gooey, man juice?

My only problem with this story is the contraceptive angle. Mom should have at least had Ricky pull out. A healthy 20 year old should have had a condom around. Mom could have used condoms to teach them each the proper way to put it on, with their hands and also their mouth.

I'm kind of on the fence about the use of the word "baby" in these stories. The entire first and second chapter has a feel of mutual acceptance, romance, familial love and understanding. It's erotic and animalistic but in a familial way. "Baby" shouldn't be used, it completely goes against the overall feel of the story.

Having mom watch definitely upped the hot level. Can't wait for chapter 3.

Wow ... One of the most beautiful writings on this site ❤️.

Type is too small in comments box and on my keyboard. How to adjust? Anyone?

The story is a bit backwards, in that it becomes more believable as it moves forward. I admit that it is virtually impossible for anyone 18 to be THAT naive, unless extremely mentally challenged. As one female commented to me, “even ugly 4th graders know more than she does.”. NOT Old Al’s words, but someone much younger i asked about the believability of this.

Regardless of how they got there, the scene here at the conclusion of chapter 2 is ultra HOT!!! I thought I was going to havve to give my Ipad a chemical bath to try and save it from melt damage! Great writing!

A little far fetched, but I’ve been stroking myself the entire time. Can’t wait for the next chapter

Kind of kinky with mom's guidance. Interesting to see what happens next.