All Comments on 'Master Says'

I enjoyed the story, SL. I was just thinking at the end you (or your character) perhaps shouldn't be trying to have it both way. It seems like the last half of the story has her trying to make the situation right and convince her master to allow her to stay. She makes a clear choice in that direction. So I was confused to see her vacillating.

A slap to the slave's face to begin the tale... I was wet before it even got good and started.

Can I be your new master SL?

;)

xoxo

A great read, I was hoping for the master to punish her at the end but great nonetheless. Maybe in your next bdsm story it'll happen :)

Very intense, hot and cleverly plotted - just wish it could have been longer!

Very well written and plotted out.. The twist at the end almost has me pitying the Master to the point I almost found it disturbing in a thoroughly enjoyable way.. very wicked of you lol...

hot

such a perfect sub... i would love to test this out!

wonderful story and so true how could a sub pick someone over there Master

Great ending. You really got the slave's perspective across. Well done. I will be reading more of your works.

cheers.

stories where is sub is pushed past the point of endurance, tricked and manipulated and then punished because dommie boy says it's all her fault and threatens the 'girl' with dismissal, even though he created a situation that's threatening her.

I'm on the look out for a story with the really unique conclusion of a sub who looks this lunatic in the eye and says -- hey big guy -- i'm out of here.

All these BDSM quick takes are the same story over and over again -- the names change, the offenses change -- but the ending stays the same. Is there a formula going around? What a waste of talent and a reader's time. Really, really boring.

Is there anyone out there with the creativity, talent and imagination to write the story with some kind of (and I don't care what it is) surprise? Apparently not. And that's a real pity.

for my previous rant. I need to find a new category to explore. Check u later...

I agree with others. Quick, Hot, Intense. Very pleasurable reading.

like your other stories beautifully wrote. you are an inspiration.

Well done!

Plot. Check. Writing style. Check. And most importantly, well crafted characters. Check!

from what the men were saying of the women they were just worthless objects to play games with while the women stayed with the men out of love and devotion. This is not how a true Master acts, if he has no real feelings for the sub/slave he should just tell her so and let her go, I mean maybe she originally came to him to be trained but if she stayed out of love then he had no right to play mind games with her head if he really didn't care about her.

Interesting. I see that a lot of the BDSM stories make use of capitalization...or lack of. That gives the character their role instantly with little explanation as to their "status."

I need to read a few more now :)