All Comments on 'Mastering Bella Ch. 09'

Please keep the updates coming! I love Master Mel and ellie...

In some ways he's amazing and in other ways he's a total asshole. Can't decide if he's worthy of her or not. Oh well, just have to wait and see.

Wow! That was certainly different Than what I had imagined. Jim was a total ass am glad she ditched him but at least it irritated Mel which I loved! Really liked that she had a bit of space to think about the previous week and that she was thinking about her future for once and what it would be like with Mel. He was a little more honest with her. I hope she sees the power she has over him one day! Amazing story, well done on keeping it moving at a great pace and never rushing it. You are giving it the detail it deserves and the depth. Wonderful description of the party, could have almost been there, I wish! Will the next chapter be the last? Am sad already. M.

Please keep the updates coming. Can't wait to see where it goes.

my favorite chapter so far! loved it

Thanks I really appreciate the comments :)

I really loved this chapter, the party was described to well!

I loved this chapter! I have been a little leery of how controlling he was being and how fast he pushed her, and to be honest the idea of him being married almost caused me to stop reading. But this chapter was wonderful and magical and I totally loved that Jenny is leaving him for another woman.

On to the next chapter...

This is such a lovely story. Nice characters, fun, laughter and power exchange, beautifully narrated.

I started by reading the 12 tables stories, which are brilliant! But this story is so sexy, love it! Wish I was young and pretty again so someone would want to own me like that :)