All Comments on 'Masters of Lavender Hill Mansion Ch. 16'

I have enjoyed the story but I really don't like the adultery you have introduced.

I agree. the whole chelsea & marlene bs thread never needed to he added. It really detracts from the story. Ollie & lisa enabling this relationship even a little should never have happened.

Waiting for the next chapter.....enjoying the mix of the story.

I understand you don't like certain parts, but remember that they are still possessed during all this. They might feel that they weren't under the influence of it, but once touched by it, it never completely goes away. The final four chapters will bring it all about to fully understand why it happens.

Thanks for reading and enjoying the series.