by geronimo_appleby
well done. the story was well written, and done very well. you didnt just jump right in, but u brought the story along well which made the ending a whole lot better than it already was. good job, please submit more.
You brought it along smooth and even. Right amount of guilt and good resolution. Keep writing
Well written, you showed both the characters' guilt very well and it was a really nicely finished piece of erotica. Good to see you've got a lot of stories up.
Being a romantic,this story really hit a note for me. Thank you for a well written story. Keep it up
The gradual building of tension is incredibly exciting. You are a talented erotic writer. Please keep these coming....
Well timed, and sensually written. I tend to look for Mom Son stories written by women (Moms) they tend to be more than just "she caught me masturbating and then we fucked". I became Ian and felt even the smallest feeling that he felt.
Thank you it was a pleasure to read.
For awhile there, I thought the story was going to end badly. Thanks for the good ending, her enjoying her son in ways we're not supposed to!
Jenny
the first time the mother borrowed his porn, instead she got a tape of her son masterbating or confessing how much he wants her, or whatever.
My mom had caught me once jerking off, after she got out of the shower, while I was in my room dressing. I thought I had time to jerk off before she got through, but it took longer than I thought to cum, and as I came, she entered the room! I grabbed up a paper towel and covered my dick. She thought I had hurt myself, and I told her I didn;t. Apparently she relized what I was doing and left. No more was said or done about that, although I took more care to hide my activities.
Loved the way it built up and progressed to them masturbating together - from then it was only a matter of time before they finally fucked together - brilliant anticipation as to when it would happen. Reminds me of a couple I knew who moved up the Lake District where I used to live and we often wondered about the age difference - I wonder......... Well done - I enjoy your stories and your writing style is so different to the American authors - a refreshing change.
I just love it when there is so much love involved.
Many incest stories seem to end when one or the other meets
someone else in college, or somewhere....I think there was just enough guilt at the beginning, then the love took over.
Please write another similar story, maybe a father and daughter one?
Once again, you've built up a nice story with a fairly good mix of reality and fantasy, with a terrific "climax" at the end. What more can a reader ask?
You know, you covered the basics of guilt, taboos, and such. How much more could we be if we, as a society, if just accepted all of this. I do not advocate nor condemn family based acts. My mother once caught me with a hard-on while I still had my underpants on and acted like it was the biggest transgression since who knows, yet was not particularly chaste when she would "need" something when bathing. I still have a fond remembrance of her small but well formed breasts! And I feel NO guilt whatsoever! So how much can we screw up our own psychic? No wonder the Europeans consider us to amateurs! We can't even pony up to a topless beach without going stupid! I do enjoy such "taboo" stories as this and I certainly understand reality Vs entertainment! Thanks!
this story is almost like me and my mom. it's just me and mom at home and years ago she caught me masturbating wearing a pair of her white briefs. we sat down and talked about it and she told me that i can wear panties all i want and if i want to masturbate i can just do it. after a short while mom started wearing just her underwear around the house with me and would watch me masturbate. we even started shopping for panties together. soon we started masturbating together in panties but thats as far as we go, although a few times i have shot my cum on her and she has felt my cock through my panties but thats it
Mother (mother) (3)
James' ( James's)
slack jawed (slack-jawed) (2)
wide eyed (wide-eyed)
well turned (well-turned)
pent up (pent-up)
mid morning (mid-morning)
same age as herself (she)
from her (pussy????) the epicentre
non existent (non-existent)
Son (son) (2)
bare foot (barefoot)
over done (over-done)
prime of her physical peak (EXCESSIVELY REDUNDANT!!!!)
wide legged (wide-legged)
slave her burning lust (slake)
mouth watering (mouth-watering)
oily digits (GREASY FINGERS IN HER CUNT!!!! HOW EROTIC????)
sudden curling in his stomach (curdling????)
arterial burst (HEMORRHAGING????)
her grip (on) his shaft
Thanks for pointing out those errors. Although, you realise the submission is over 10 years old? I've addressed the issues you've raised since then.
Thanks for reading, though.
So fucking incestuously hot! Mother and son fucking and talking dirty. I love it!!
Enjoyed this Story So Much! I thought it was Especially Hot! When Mom Posed Sexy for Her Son in the Hall, While His Eyes were Transfixed to Her Gorgeous Naked Body, that She Kept So Well in Shape. I Loved Her Sense of Adventure! Just walking into His bedroom wanting to look for a DVD to watch, and Shocked Her Unsuspecting Horny Son with Her Lustful Naked Beauty again! As she Sat right on the bed with Him, just like being Buddies and Mutual Masturbaters for a long time. She So Boldly and Excitingly Just Dove in head first and allowed Him to Watch Her Play, as She Reached the Height of Orgasms from the Excitement of Her Son Watching and Devouring Her Body and Sexuality. Loved It! Encore!!!
Fantastic. I loved that they moved away so they could openly be lovers.
Pretty hot.
I love a romantic incest story. However, they are hard to find. Most of the stories portray only lust, no love. Rest of them move on, leaving each other. This story was very good.
A random story pick. After my folks divorced I was the last of the kids home, while I never had sex with my mom, I did jerk off more than a few times to her sounds when a male friend was over. She might not have known that but she certainly knew judging from her comments and expressions and from the smell in my room I was jerking off. Ah, discretion.