All Comments on 'Matt & I Ch. 01'

by D. Elbee

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AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
greatest story told

I really loved that story and the sincerity and the love the son had for his mother I hope you keep writing more of that story

AnonymousAnonymousover 20 years ago
Great Story!

Love your writing. Hope you will continue. Please continue with the love they have for each other. Hope to see the next chapter soon. Thanks.

ScribblerosScribblerosover 20 years ago
Great Story..Bring On More..

Please continue this interestingly written tale.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
Finally!

After reading many, many stories on Literotica, a story where two people making passionate love don't have a long, casual conversation! The whole idea of chatting during sex is obsurd to me. I know I can only use one head at a time! Really good writting, can't wait for more!

le artistele artisteover 19 years ago
Extremely well-written!

Your style fit the subject quite well,and made a more interesting story than usual. Hope that you plan to do more!

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
Very well done extremely exciting, but yet sad

It is sad when two people find the exact person that makes their world rock, but to have one of the couple involved with another. I can see her point of not hurting her husband/his father, but the sorrow of not being together is heavy on their hearts. Very well written, thanks....Rich

Sex4lf57Sex4lf57about 10 years ago

Nice story. It's good that she doesn't have DD perky tits and he doesn't have as 12" schlong. Looking forward to reading the next 5 chapters.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
OMG! Please write another chapter

The way you convey their love for each other is beautiful.

Alex BelligAlex Belligover 6 years ago
Loved it!!

I read all the chapters and love all of them. Thank you very much. Very erotic and good style of writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago

WTF

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