by D. Elbee
I really loved that story and the sincerity and the love the son had for his mother I hope you keep writing more of that story
Love your writing. Hope you will continue. Please continue with the love they have for each other. Hope to see the next chapter soon. Thanks.
Please continue this interestingly written tale.
After reading many, many stories on Literotica, a story where two people making passionate love don't have a long, casual conversation! The whole idea of chatting during sex is obsurd to me. I know I can only use one head at a time! Really good writting, can't wait for more!
Your style fit the subject quite well,and made a more interesting story than usual. Hope that you plan to do more!
It is sad when two people find the exact person that makes their world rock, but to have one of the couple involved with another. I can see her point of not hurting her husband/his father, but the sorrow of not being together is heavy on their hearts. Very well written, thanks....Rich
Nice story. It's good that she doesn't have DD perky tits and he doesn't have as 12" schlong. Looking forward to reading the next 5 chapters.
The way you convey their love for each other is beautiful.
I read all the chapters and love all of them. Thank you very much. Very erotic and good style of writing.