All Comments on 'Matt, Suze, and Kerry'

I was lucky enough to get to have a set of twins while I was in college. lol..I'm married to one of them now and the they still BOTH like to play with me from time to time.

Only thing I could not believe was that Matt was still hard for three sessions.

i couldn't read this story just reading the tag line i could tell it was a piece of crap and totally unrealistic no way is a virgin guy going to have a threesome as his first time he would not allow it keep it atleast sounding realistic please

And gee! It was unrealistic? That must be a first -- an unrealistic porn story!

Seriously, I enjoyed it. And if it was unrealistic, well, a lot of sex happenings are. That's part of the joy of it. When they become common-place there's something wrong, and one of you is going to move on. This was fun; it probably wouldn't happen again, and there's a good chance he'd end up with little sister.

I'd like to read another, where they have a real 3-way, with the sisters getting it on with each other and him, then maybe she finds a guy and the 4 of them end up as friends, where no one gets hurt and everyone feels good -- now THAT'S really unrealistic!

Probably the best story i've ever read here!........I'm a bigger pervert than you are :-)

Nuh-uh.

i liked it a lot and its definitely in my top 20 and I've read nearly all 4.5 's and higher in this category. i don't often write comments and certainly wouldn't call it unrealistic, as stated in another comment. In real life some people get luckier than others as well and it surely makes it more interesting to read (or write) about :)

Love your stories. Especially this one. Would LOVE more of the threesome! Fun, fun, fun.

As always, sexy, funny, hot and steamy. Once again, you've delivered!

5 Stars!

When you write you need a sence to know when to stop and when to continue and this needs to be continued. Great story

Good story....but could be WAY better!!! First off, Matt is a pussy! What guy would ever think of going to hell for fucking two women...at the insistence of both of them? Many more comments, including find an editor! Where's part 2? Matt eat either girl? WTF???

Needs a part 2. This is hot.

You're a good author. Keep up the good work.

This definitely needs a part 2!!!

""Almost," said Suze. I felt her hand move mine down her smooth bare leg almost to the knee, and then back up again – all the way to the top of her thigh. My hand was now resting on the material of her shorts, and when I glanced sideways again I realized that the tips of my fingers were maybe an inch away from her pussy. My hard-on pushed painfully against my jeans but I didn't dare try to adjust it for fear of Suze noticing. I felt her move my hand another half inch towards her crotch. I realized that I wasn't breathing.

@@@ like she's going to have a problem with your woody, umm think she's trying to make one ;) @@@

"Well, how much longer is it gonna take?" whined Kerry.

"Almost there," said Suze as she moved my hand onto her mound. We each let out a little involuntary moan.

@@@ Lol, I lived that, hehehe! Kinda like matching music in a sex scene ;( @@@

"What?" Kerry said again. "You're mumbling, Suze. Are we there?"

Suze laughed. "Oh, we are SO there."

@@@ That's the kind of girls I like, outgoing, forward, go-getters!! ;) @@@

Do you want to try kissing it?" said Suze.

"Sure, I guess," said Kerry

Oh, man, the idea of another girl sucking me off... But I was hot for Suze, not her little sister. "Uh, Suze..." I said.

@@@ ...is he dumb as a rock, or what?! ‘Gee, if this keeps up I might wind up fucking my girlfriend and her sister too, I better put a stop to that!’. (Doh! Facepalm!! Someone shoot this moron so I can take his place!!!) @@@

Suze was making a loud, unintelligible mix of nonsense sounds, moving from one orgasm to the next. Intermixed into this was a steady, "Ungh... ungh... ungh!" from both of us, uttered in time with the rhythmic slap-slap-slap of our bodies ramming together. I moved one hand down onto her mound and started playing with her clitoris, and she began to scream.

@@@ ...moving from one orgasm to the next...seriously, where ARE these girls?! Lol. @@@

Finally I sensed my own orgasm beginning, not in my impossibly hard erection, or my balls, but seemingly in my very soul. It spread over my entire body, down my legs and into my toes, and deep into my chest. And, as I came into my beautiful, wonderful new lover, my lips began to tingle and my vision clouded, and I may have lost consciousness for a moment.

@@@ ROFL. I got nothing. @@@

Suddenly, there was the sound of loud applause and scattered hooting. I looked to my right and saw all of our friends from the play sitting on the dunes and looking down at us. Shit! I covered Suze's nude body as best I could.

@@@ nothing like putting on a show! They’ll have the dolphins rubbing up against them when they go swimming now, hehehe @@@

"Wow," said Kerry. "I can't wait until I'm in college, too."

@@@ pffft! Wait schmait! Just jump Mike when he gets done swimming. Er, I mean Matt, yeah Matt. ;) @@@

Likeable characters and steamy sex scenes...it has enough of all of these to warrant a 5 and at least one or two more chapters.

This is one of your best. I have to agree withthe others, another chapter would be great.

he needed to have included fucking kerry also........

I loved the story even more the second time. This really deserves a second part. Please?

Thanks for writing! Five stars!

Awesome and fun I really like your style and will read all your stories.

Hands on can be fun.

I love lab work when done with a partner.

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You have a great talent....AND so do your characters!

I hope you Wright a lot more chapters!

LOL

Hoping for another chapter :)

Liked this very much. Hope there's more in the future.

this is the first time icomment.

im going to read more of your stories.

In college yet?

Please say you are writing more, I'm in wet spot here. I need more lol

Great story, hopefully you got more in you.

Thank you,

Annie

I can still remember walking down the beach at sunset after opening night with a stacked 5 foot 11 blonde one one side and her 6 foot 1 also blonde "little sister" on the other. And other things. Good times.

Good story but everything happened awful fast. Poor Kerry didn't get her cherry popped.

I really enjoyed it. Thanks.

Stopped a chapter short. Common in Literotica.

corny, formulaic, repetitive...sorry

Fun but incomplete.

Kerry needed fucked too.

A 3 star average story as it stands. Very little character development.

Bill S.

So very predictable. Too much is missing from this half story.

3* at the most

BJ

Another two or three pages would be needed to end this story. Predictable it is, but hey, this is a stroke story and I found it fun to read. Details were where they needed to be!

Fun and erotic, well done. FIVE

Kerry needs fucked too. Continue this please

Great introduction to sex: the love of your life AND her little sister at a love-in! A very well thought out and written story. I definitely look forward to reading more of your work. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination (memories?) and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.

I don't know what some of these other readers' were thinking as they read. But I liked it. Continue with Kerry getting her cherry busted by Matt and have the sisters 69ing at some point. Because they got into kissing.

I loved it! A unique story line. Good work.

Wow! Hot! Needs a second chapter.

Oh what FUN I just enjoyed Matt's ongoing desire to be lead so as not to be offensive first to his mother and describing her slow sensual behavior as she seduces him. And after she brings in a girl he has dreams about but believes she is out of his league. He is so surprised when she makes the move on him he has only fantasized about. I really identified with him in his cautious approach. I was to fearful til I was sure I was wanted and invited to pleasure my partner (I was never as lucky as him though.) Also loved the women asserting that they were likely going to be wildly out of control. Look forward to more!!

Really wasn't a threesome for all three wasn't involved

Another fun, sexy, story - but, what happens with Kerry? Maybe three roomates?