All Comments on 'Mature Madeline Dominates Ch. 02'

I love Mistress Madeline telling the poor (?) guy everithing that's gonna happend to him in advance.

Hope to read more soon, several months between part 1 and 2 are too much.

An excellent addition to the story. Your writing is exquisite, particularly ….

“Madeline eased her slender shoulders down to the bed with a smirk of satisfaction, leaving the broad and inviting cheeks of her buttocks high, exposing the delicious pucker of her mature anus.”

How I wish I could assume that position daily and watch as she clenched and dilated her sticky anus invitingly for me to lick and probe, to prove my subservience.

Wonderful. I can practically taste Madeline.

OK premise.

But lacks eroticism.

At least, when he's fucking her with the ball gag, and he's masturbating, he should have been given orders/directions/ instructions on both how he should be jerking off and how he shoule use tthe ball gag's cock to fuck her.

Three stars.