All Comments on 'Mature Madeline Dominates'

Good set up. looking forward to the entertainment!

Let the party begin ;)

An excellent opening chapter to what I hope will become a lengthy serial. Just enough titillation to get the juices flowing. I look forward to the next installment eagerly. 5 stars for this one.

Brilliant opening. Some wonderful characters here...can't wait to see how this develops

more!

What a wonderful start!! I hope this becomes another of your outstanding series!!

I appreciate that Will is eager to embrace being humiliated.

Great start. Thank you. Look forward to the next chapter.

A very promising start to a new version of an old story.

5*****

A great start to another amazing story. Can't wait to find out how Mistress Madeline ensures Will's absolute servility through the use of tight chastity, strict discipline, and the humiliating cock gag.

Another enjoyable story with your usual formula. There seems to be an assumption it is the first of another series but, with its title, I’m not so certain. I’m sure it would be an entertaining series if that’s what you intend. It’s entertaining as a one off and the cliffhanger ending titillates and invites the reader to use their imagination.

“Will's anus tingled with a dark pleasure….” Wow! The author’s inventiveness has no limits….and besides, no quality erotica is possible without anuses participating in it – this is an absolute must.

Vittorio Vittorossi

I need to read more chapters of this.

Interesting premise.

But all back story.

Four stars.