All Comments on 'Maurice Ch. 10'

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MzMagicBeautyMzMagicBeautyabout 12 years ago
AWWWWW!!!

I loved it... It was a great ending to a great story. Love your work have read every single of of your stories and have fell in love with them all. You actually gave me the courage to write a story of my own. So thank you for that. And great job again !!!

SunshineChica73SunshineChica73about 12 years ago

I loved the story,but which that their ending was as detailed as the other parts of their life. It felt kind of cheated for them all, but maybe there will be more about this bunch somewhere down the line...at least I hope so. Who knowns maybe I just wasn't ready for it to end. Great Story!

rastogi2008rastogi2008about 12 years ago
Awesome!!!!

I really loved it.

I would also like a story on Gremlin. I want to ask you from when you will start posting your stories on your site wwwDOTkalamazoo707DOTcom.

kalamazoo707kalamazoo707about 12 years agoAuthor
website

I'm not sure, the last time I checked it was still under construction.

rastogi2008rastogi2008about 12 years ago
To kalamazoo707

Have you given a thought to Gremlin's story. I think it will be very interesting.

kalamazoo707kalamazoo707about 12 years agoAuthor
Gremlin's story

I haven't thought too much about it but who knows?

donaldedonaldeabout 12 years ago
excellent ending

to a great tale i enjoyed this story immensely and hope that oyu decide to continue it with some form of a sequel

kelleigh0127kelleigh0127about 12 years ago
5 starts all the way

I was kinda sad to let Maurice and Regina go but knowing she loves him like he her was just wonderful. I swear your stories always leave me wanting to find someone as kind and loving as what you write. Thanks for sharing .. with much love a loyal fan and reader. _ Kelleigh

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Great Ending to a Great Story!!

I loved this story.

Once all the suspense and action died down; it settled nicely into a wonderful romance.

Lord, Regina tried my patience sometimes; but Maurice Delgado had infinite patience with her.

Great job, as usual, Kal!!!

~Bluegardenia

Iread2relaxIread2relaxabout 12 years ago
Awesome Story

Thank you Kalamazoo707, for sharing this story with us. I loved it. I love all of your stories. You are truly talented. Congrats on another success.

MizTMizTabout 12 years ago
Nice Finish

This was a really enjoyable story to read. That Maurice got the girl was never in question, but how he got her was the real story. For all of Maurice's strengths when it came right down to it was his patience that won out in the end. To bad there aren't more real mean like Maurice, well at least not in large supply...hehe-he

Now that I have found you and your storys, I look forward to reading more from you. Thanks for sharing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Loved it! Loved your writing!

Thank you so much for this finale. It was a long time coming and worth the wait. Beautifully executed. My hat off to you. Thank you so much for sharing your talent and I look forward to continuing to read and enjoy your work as long as you keep putting it out there. Happy writing!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago

Awesome!!! Maurice wore Regina and he rocked her world!!! They had a little boy, that is so sweet.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
SUPERB

Marvelous ending to a fabulous story. You're an awe-inspiring skillful, and versatile author. you have numerous stories posting at once, and they're all fantastic.I don't know how you do it,but I thank you for all them.Hats off to you Kalamazoo,job well done.

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmabout 12 years ago
Would have preferred

Usually don't come out like this, but since it started with Maurice; I think it should have ended with him. Not a bad ending at all, but it always felt like it was his story.

You are the author so, of course, you write it how you want. I give you much respect as I enjoy your products.

Just another perspective.

katgoddess1katgoddess1about 12 years ago
good story

A great example about how persistence and taking things slowly can be rewarding.

MadameblaqueMadameblaqueabout 12 years ago
Glad...

It's great that Regina stopped fighting fate and realized that Delgado was who she needed in her life. Delgado was very patient and persistent. Loved this story!!!

THELOVELY1GLOTHELOVELY1GLOalmost 12 years ago
Beautiful

After the many rounds of fighting.

mrskelleymrskelleyalmost 12 years ago
Great Story!

Love your stories!

AmazonBeauty1966AmazonBeauty1966over 5 years ago
Excellent!

What a joy to watch Maurice and Regina find their path together! Beautifully written, you easily brought them alive in my reading mind ... Thank you!

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