by TheGreatLakes
.......so I don't suppose there's going to be a chapter 5 - is there ?
It'll be a shame if you don't continue this series, it really is HOT !
Rapier
Should have not posted this chapter. I think it ruined the rest of the story.. It felt rushed and put together hastily just to get it done. I gave the rest of you story five stars. This only got four.
Story is starting to wear a little thin with too many protagonists (grand dad?) Also, you seem to have an anal fixation . . . .