by TheGreatLakes
An interesting story with lots of good directions you could pursue. Characters are not "card board" and most significantly they appear true to life. I personally like characters in this Lit category who are mostly " centered" and are not seriously emotionally flawed. Not having enough money is only human! Keep going if you feel the urge.
Ed
Love the characters, they're very believable. Good story line and I hope you give us more? Thanks for sharing your talent.
Please write up a sequel to this story as it has the good bones for a story series.
Great story and I do hope you continue it with more episodes, it would nice to see what happens next.
Can't wait to see the next chapter of a great story. Great characters. Thanks
Max is not a very sympathetic character. Instead of experiencing any angst about this porn business he is perverted from the start. Reminds me of the "Uncle Buck" character on SNL. However, the eroticism level is high. Pretty good.
Amazing you should make more chapters mabye you could be a writer someday