All Comments on 'Max Porn Inc.'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Nice keep it going

Wang4Wang4almost 9 years ago
It could be a great start

An interesting story with lots of good directions you could pursue. Characters are not "card board" and most significantly they appear true to life. I personally like characters in this Lit category who are mostly " centered" and are not seriously emotionally flawed. Not having enough money is only human! Keep going if you feel the urge.

Ed

boaman007boaman007almost 9 years ago
Great start

Love the characters, they're very believable. Good story line and I hope you give us more? Thanks for sharing your talent.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
More

Please write up a sequel to this story as it has the good bones for a story series.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wow!

Great storyline. I will be back for more chapters! Thanks!

Lee_hottyLee_hottyalmost 9 years ago
Love it, do continue

Great story and I do hope you continue it with more episodes, it would nice to see what happens next.

sabra16023sabra16023almost 9 years ago
More More

Can't wait to see the next chapter of a great story. Great characters. Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago

Max is not a very sympathetic character. Instead of experiencing any angst about this porn business he is perverted from the start. Reminds me of the "Uncle Buck" character on SNL. However, the eroticism level is high. Pretty good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
Wow

Amazing you should make more chapters mabye you could be a writer someday

ToughSailorToughSailor3 months ago

Segue is definitely your long suit. Next chapter please . . . .

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