All Comments on 'May Second'

by Scorpio44

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BOSTONFICTIONWRITERBOSTONFICTIONWRITERabout 17 years ago
I liked it.

It was different. It was creative. The writing was professional. What was there not to like.

Thanks

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
one of your best

I really love your writing. This is one of your best. Short but to the point and well written. Loved the humour as well.

PEATBOGPEATBOGabout 17 years ago
A hot tale!!!

Wow, what a hot, hot tale! There is so much that could be said about this clever, humorous story but any further comments would be superfluous. Pete.

GAnnEGAnnEabout 17 years ago
A SPECIAL time for both of them!

NOW THAT is quite a story...so hot we all may be dripping?

I just wonder what might happen the next time it rains???

AnonymousAnonymousabout 17 years ago
Awesome Story

Awesome story with a lot of mystery and drama. Well, she certainly got her wish! It appears she even enjoyed delivering the revenge. Great ending. Only wish a woman like that would approach me someday with a similar offer.

PikkuKallePikkuKalleover 14 years ago
Hmm?

Well written, as usual. But left me with so many questions. May 2nd? What's going on, why, etc?

TavadelphinTavadelphinabout 13 years ago
too much fun -

Nice - quick - fun - well done -

JohnnyMaxJohnnyMaxover 11 years ago
So why?

Short, sharp, but what's the point?

Why in the church?

1zardoz956081zardoz95608about 10 years ago
Erica Jong?

The "Zipless Fuck" comes to mind.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
WHAT PATHETIC SHITE

JUST A LOAD OF HOG WASH...

Oldsofty1961Oldsofty1961over 2 years ago

rated a 2 too many open ended quetions ?

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