All Comments on 'Me & Emily & Daddy's Cum Ch. 01'

Great story, I loved the internal dialogue, particularly the depth of it. Keep it up.

I can see this one running and running.

I really like the characters, and your style of writing.

Thanks.

Excellent, so well written and so very believeable! Can't wait for the sybian to cum into play, pun intended!

I don't know where you're going with this, but it's a phenominal beginning! Better by far than my own stalled effort in a slightly similar genre. (Tuesday, Ch 1, if you're curious about the tale I refer to)

Very rich character especially given the length of this chapter.

I can hear the song in my mind. Sexual awakening in the young is like a hard punch to the gut. Finding a fucking machine, not quite in vogue when I was a young guy, adds a whole new chapter to this age old rite. Times change, but people don't. We all just LOVE sex. Smooth start Jim.

Paris kidnapped Helen and took her to Troy, where his dad was king.

I have read most of your stories and love them, great job!!

So well written