All Comments on 'Me and My Two Mothers'

I really wanted to like this story but the use of childish terms like "cunny" really took me out of it, as did the shifting in perspectives. I wish the entire story was set from the sons perspective.

No one talks like that. It sounds ridiculous!

I found this story to be quite enjoyable.

Maybe a bit on the long side but other than that very well written.

great story. not too long at all. and i hope you do a chapter 2. well written, great storyline. good tease at the opening. very enjoyable!!! ENCORE please!

Great, well done story. I think you could add multiple chapters here. 3 great characters to work with and a very very very sexy story!

Really enjoyed the story. Was not a fan of the bold print of some key words. I did enjoy the use of the mama and mommy names instead of the ladies real names. It really made the story flow

A very yummy story! Thank you!

I would love to see a chapter 2.

This was well done.

It's a pity it had to stop so soon.

What can I say. One of the best incest stories I've read in a long time. Thanks for sharing!

story! Nice build up , fantastic finish!

Great story I hope you write a second chapter

Loved it. Great story. Hoping for a Part 2.

All three are relaxed and satisfied - so well written - thank you!

your spelling could do with some work, but overall it was a very uplifting story.

paul G

I love how you nicely intertwined the sexual desire with the deep and absolute love they feel for each other. In my imagination, the story will continue through the pregnancy to many loved and perfect little children.

Thank you

Bob

Only thing that could have made it better if there was a dedicated Impregnation scene or if they told him to pump a baby into them when each took him for the first time.

It wouldn't be just a hot addition but also fitting since both of them really got off to that fantasy during their first six scene.

But even without it it's a Damn hot story.

You could have added more details like both the Mom and Mama begging to be impregnated. The boy let's his animalistic instincts take over and continues to impregnate them for the whole night.

Then you could make both Mom and Mama pregnant with girls who love their father. And Jack takes their Virginities andand impregnates them and also impregnates his Mom and Mama again along with his daughters.

Jack really needed to get a taste of what both of his Mothers had been delighting in all those years. Like "Heather straddled Jack's face as Sarah rode her sons cock like a mechanical bull at the county fair" or "Jack worked his way down Sarah's belly after finishing with her beautiful breasts. He'd always wanted to see why Heather loved to spend so much time with her face buried between mom's legs". And maybe Heather describing the difference between Sarah and "her first man" going down on her.

Just a few thoughts. GREAT story though. Loved it!!

This is a very good story, certainly better than anything I’ve read here lately. I wouldn’t mind seeing another chapter, I think there’s more of Jack and his two mothers’ story to be told. But a big “Thank You” to the author for this one. I loved it.

I LOVE THE STORY!!!!

Write More!!!!

would love to have a second chapter

years later as bother mothers gave in a daughter

and would take there virginity

add also bi with there mothers

This story was very well done.

It's great story hope to read more about two mother's

A bit too long on the build up, but overall a good story. 4*

Enjoyed the story. I like character development. I thoroughly enjoy romantic, erotic stories with characters who truly love and support each other. 5 star rating.

perfect story i like it.

Excellent story. Crafted perfectly, it handles the sexual

tension, the eroticism and the pure love felt and expressed between the three characters deftly.

Oh, and it was pretty f***ing hot, as well.

Great story. Don't mind the longer buildup to the finale, that sometimes makes it more of a reward in the end. The fact that both of them had the same feeling for their son (and being either lesbian or bisexual) made it all the better. I don't always think that the women in these stories need to get pregnant all the time and wish that some of these stories would leave that part out, but even with that it was a well crafted story

Great story. Love it. AAAAAA++++++

Loved it.

Woud like to see series of this story.

It has perfect blend of lesbain mom son sex.

Well done.

Just flippin' brill!

10/10!!!!!

I loved it. A truly romantic incest story. 5*.

Great story actually very jealous. The moms should have explained sex to their son more, he acted way to experienced to be a virgin first fuck.

Also I didn't think having mom fall asleep and missing her lesbian wife's first experience with a cock was good at all.

You needed to exband on the pregnancies. Your end was fine but just throwing in the assumption of protecting the baby is not real life at conception. End their incestuous experience then say mom and moma became wide wife for each other, enjoying being pregnant at the same time.

Don't ever ruin it by having dad take his daughters virginity or have sex at all...

I LIKED IT ANY MORE IN FUTURE?

Fucking A, That story was the most well balanced per se' I have read on this site yet! Awesome, awesome, fucking awesome job.💪🤘.. perfectly well written. I'm jealous as hell of Jack now..lucky lil shit. Lol..5 stars don't do shit for this story 11/10 in my opinion ❤️🔥🔥🔥🔥😉😉

This was written with Google translate!

I love it when stories end romantically and I'm left thinking that it's love shared in a deep and right way. Just it!

I loved your story, with one issue. Lesbians don't want men, they may like to be fucked with a dildo; but it's the man that doesn't turn them on. Had you made both Mom's bi; it's a slam dunk 5.

Thank you for a lovely story.

A solid 2* story line is fine, grammar and language skills are pathetic.

A solid 2* story line is fine, grammar and language skills are pathetic.

A beautiful story...

That was actually a very sweet and loving story, not to mention sexy as hell.

Nice build up to the story and about as realistic as you can get for a fantasy story only major issue is a lot of words was out of place and misspelled you need a editor or at least a better editor

This is a simplified copycat of an English story I once read but didn't find back in the mass of incest sex stories. Was about the same situation in a rather poor English village but he first cheated on his real mother first with his mother's friend. Afterwards it became also a trio. The end chapter was, because of their rather tight financial situation, about a long time a weekend with a trio in an hotel room in a nearby English seaside village. Stylishly more English and authentic with really good and deeper descriptions of the relations and their stress.

Well done. Shows how friendship, respect and trust are so important in commitment and loving!

Couldn't finish. The dialogue was just way too ridiculous at times. I don't understand how an author can write dialogue like this and actually think, "Ya, that sounds natural." It boggles my mind. 1/5

Really this is the example how a good story execution so bad...worst story

Wonderful story, held my interest from start to finish.